This document provides an outline for a workshop on scientific writing skills. It describes Module 5 of the workshop which focused on style and language specifics, including specificity, complexity, and ambiguity. The module was presented by Professor Valtencir Zucolotto and discussed guidelines for abbreviations, numerals, tense usage, voice (active vs passive), formality of language, emphasis on details, and reducing ambiguity. Examples were provided throughout to illustrate concepts.
Módulo 5: Estilo Linguagem 1: Especificidade, Complexidade e Ambiguidade
Módulo 6: Linguagem 2: Redundâncias, Ação no Verbo, Fluidez de Texto, Ritmo de Escrita
Módulo 5: Estilo Linguagem 1: Especificidade, Complexidade e Ambiguidade
Módulo 6: Linguagem 2: Redundâncias, Ação no Verbo, Fluidez de Texto, Ritmo de Escrita
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This talk is aimed at encouraging a more independent approach to using PHP frameworks, moving towards a more flexible and future-proof approach to PHP development.
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Připravujete svůj první vědecký článek v anglickém jazyce? Umíte si poradit s abstraktem? Rádi byste získali lepší kompetence v tom, jak by měl být článek strukturován? Potřebujete vědět, které části odborného textu jsou klíčové pro čtenáře, které pro recenzenty? Chcete se vyvarovat chyb, které se opakovaně v cizojazyčných vědeckých článcích vyskytují? Pak byl právě pro vás určen seminář, který vedl zkušený lektor akademického psaní v angličtině z Centra jazykové přípravy MU PhDr. Robert Helán, Ph.D.
In his public lecture, Christian Timmerer provides insights into the fascinating history of video streaming, starting from its humble beginnings before YouTube to the groundbreaking technologies that now dominate platforms like Netflix and ORF ON. Timmerer also presents provocative contributions of his own that have significantly influenced the industry. He concludes by looking at future challenges and invites the audience to join in a discussion.
PHP Frameworks: I want to break free (IPC Berlin 2024)Ralf Eggert
In this presentation, we examine the challenges and limitations of relying too heavily on PHP frameworks in web development. We discuss the history of PHP and its frameworks to understand how this dependence has evolved. The focus will be on providing concrete tips and strategies to reduce reliance on these frameworks, based on real-world examples and practical considerations. The goal is to equip developers with the skills and knowledge to create more flexible and future-proof web applications. We'll explore the importance of maintaining autonomy in a rapidly changing tech landscape and how to make informed decisions in PHP development.
This talk is aimed at encouraging a more independent approach to using PHP frameworks, moving towards a more flexible and future-proof approach to PHP development.
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The modern software delivery process (or the CI/CD process) includes many tools, distributed teams, open-source code, and cloud platforms. Constant focus on speed to release software to market, along with the traditional slow and manual security checks has caused gaps in continuous security as an important piece in the software supply chain. Today organizations feel more susceptible to external and internal cyber threats due to the vast attack surface in their applications supply chain and the lack of end-to-end governance and risk management.
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Bob Boule
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Workshops escrita modulos_5_6
1. Organização: Pró-Reitoria de Pesquisa - USP
Workshop de Capacitação em
Escrita Científica
Módulo 5
Prof. Dr. Valtencir Zucolotto
Laboratório de Nanomedicina e Nanotoxicologia
Instituto de Física de São Carlos, USP
USP, 2012
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Prof. Dr. Valtencir Zucolotto
zuco@ifsc.usp.br
2. Workshop Outline
Modulo 1: O Gênero Literário
Seções de Um Artigo Científico
Módulo 2: Estrutura 1: Abstract
Módulo 3: Estrutura 2: Introduction
Módulo 4: Estrutura 3: Results and Discussion, Conclusion
Módulo 5: Estilo
Linguagem 1: Especificidade, Complexidade e Ambiguidade
Módulo 6: Linguagem 2: Redundâncias, Ação no Verbo, Fluidez de
Texto, Ritmo de Escrita
Módulo 7: Linguagem 3: Plain English, Escrever em Inglês, Preposições
Módulo 8: Linguagem 4: Topic Sentences, Cover Letters, Final Remarks
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3. Módulo 5
- Estilo
- Linguagem 1:
Especificidade, Complexidade e Ambiguidade
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5. Abbreviations
Define the abbreviation in parentheses the
first time you use it:
Green Fluorescent Protein (GFP)
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6. Abbreviations
Use Abbreviations / acronyms with discretion
Ex: Use of combined 5-PAS and BTR3 increased the
OP toxicity for MD14+ cells
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7. Abbreviations
Words “day’, “week”, “month” and “year” are not
abbreviated.
Except in the case of footnotes, tables and captions, spell out
all months with or without a specific day :
Ex: Data were collected in January, 2000.
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8. Abbreviations
U.S. citizens;
U.K. football team
(Adjectives)
or
“The citizens from United States….”
“The football team of United Kingdom….”
(nouns)
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9. Abbreviations
Units of measure are abbreviated : 2 mm.; 10 min.
In a non-measurable context: "we measured length in
millimeters"
OBS: Never add an "s" to the measure unit.
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10. Abbreviations
Latin abbreviations:
- i.e., id est (that is),
- e.g., exempli gratia (for example),
- etc. (so on),
- vs (versus),
- et al., et alli, and others,
- via (road),
- in situ (in a place)
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11. Abbreviations
Controversy: Some authors agree that a period is used
only if the last letter of the abbreviation is not the last
letter of the word:
Ex.: Prof. , Vol. 1, p. 23-25 , 2nd ed. , et al. , etc.
Dr , Mr , Ms , vs
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12. Numerals
A good reference material may be found at:
The ACS Style Guide, Dodd, J. S., Ed;
American Chemical Society, Washington, DC, 2006
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13. Numerals
Use a space between the number and the unit:
6 min, 0.3 g, 80 mL, etc.
Exception: %, $ and °
50%, $400, 180° (Obs: 90 °C, 180 °F).
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14. What Tense to use?
Use past tense for sentences concerning your findings.
Ex: This study was aimed at investigating.. (The study)
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15. What Tense to use?
Present forms preferable in
Conclusion Section
Present and even Future Tenses may be used!!
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16. Active / Passive Voices
Passive voice almost always requires more words than
Active voice:
ACTIVE: “the melting processing consumed
polymeric material at a higher rate..” (10 words)
PASSIVE: “Polymeric material was consumed by the
melting process at a higher rate..” (12 words)
Mathews, JR and and Mathews RW, Successful Scientific Writing, Cambridge University
Press; 3 edition 2007)
Dodd, J. S., Ed. The ACS Style Guide; American Chemical Society: Washington,
DC, 1986.).
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17. First vs Third Person
Sometimes first person may be used to
emphasize important information
Our research group has investigated….
We have demonstrated that….
Avoid: “we believe”, “we feel”, “we can see”
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18. Formal Language
Avoid
nowadays
on the contrary
(up) until now
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Better
presently, currently
in contrast
to date
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20. Lets face it, English is a stupid language.
There is no egg in the eggplant.
No ham in the hamburger.
And neither pine nor apple in the pineapple.
English muffins were not invented in England.
French fries were not invented in France.
http://www.gray-area.org/Research/Ambig/#HEAD
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21. Specificity
The efficient writing is specific
“Novel strategies have been proposed to overcome the
limitations regarding diseases diagnosis.”
Too general!!
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What were the strategies?
What are the limitations?
What are the diseases?
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22. Specificity
The use of carbon nanotubes-based biosensors
has been proposed to overcome the poor selectivity
exhibited by conventional systems used for cancer
detection.
Better !!
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23. Specificity
Carbon nanotubes-based biosensors exhibit high
selectivity for cancer detection.
Efficient Scientific Writing!!
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24. The right emphasis on details
Possible ways of emphasizing details:
Repetition, wording, illustration and placement
Source: Michael Alley The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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25. The right emphasis on Details
1. Repetition
Title, abstract, discussion and conclusions ??
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26. The right emphasis on Details
2. Wording
Stress the most important details in a sentence!!
Ex: High levels of the protein were found in the blood
samples from patients with hemorrhagic infections.
What is the most important detail?
The protein, the levels or the infection?
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27. The right emphasis on Details
Unexpected high levels of a protein were found in the
blood samples from patients with hemorrhagic infections.
High levels of a very specific S100 family protein were
found in the blood samples from patients with
hemorrhagic infections.
High levels of a specific protein were found in the blood
samples from examined patients. This may be the cause
of the hemorrhagic infection.
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28. Complexity: Sentences
A huge problem: Long Sentences
The mechanical analyses had been carried out using
stress-strain measurements and indicated that the
copper-based alloys are more resistant than the silverbased ones, which may be due to the fabrication process
used for each composite material, since the copper
alloys had been produced via casting, whereas the silver
composites had been fabricated via reactive extrusion
under high pressures, controlled atmosphere, and at
temperatures ranging from 300 – 400 °C.
????????
Too long!,
Too wordy!
Too many ideas in a single sentence!!
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29. Complexity: Sentences
Streamlining it:
First half of the sentence:
The mechanical analyses had been carried out
using…..
Second half :
.............................................................................
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30. Complexity: Sentences
M5P2 IEEE T.E.C.
The proposed memetic algorithm that combines search by an ES [44] on
the upper level and nonlinear local optimizations to handle complex
nonlinear equality constraints and to realize a Lamarckian learning
principle is a promising concept for general design optimization problems
in which a large number of nonlinear model equations and constraints as
well as discrete design decisions and possibly discontinuous value
functions are present, well beyond the domain of chemical engineering.
While the selection of the representation as well as of the mutation and
recombination operators is of course problem specific and has to be
modified for different applications, and the use of other local solvers may
also require small changes to the algorithm, the general principle can be
transferred to any similar problem, and significant gains in computational
performance and robustness (probability of finding the best as well as most
of the local optima) can be expected.
Urselmann, et al., IEEE Transactions on Evolutionary Computation, 15, 2011, 659
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31. Stacking of Passive Voice
A new methodology for protein purification
is presented. Isolation techniques using
HPLC are discussed. The amount of
protein purified in each cycle is revealed.
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32. Stacking of Passive Voice
This study describes a new methodology for
protein purification using novel techniques based
on HPLC experiments. Each purification cycle
provided a total amount of 1.2 mg of protein.
Better!!
Active voice is straightforward
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33. Ambiguity
Words/phrases with more than one
meaning
Chickens are ready to eat
????
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35. Ambiguity
Word Choice:
“Tissue temperature increased as the
particles released the phytotherapics”
????
The word “as” may be interpreted as “because” or “while”
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36. Ambiguity
“Tissue temperature increased because the
particles released the phytotherapics”
Better
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37. Ambiguity
Only I tested the device yesterday
I only tested the device yesterday
I tested only the device yesterday
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38. Ambiguity
“ In low water temperatures and high toxicity levels of
oil, we tested how well the microorganisms survived”
Better: “We tested how well the microorganisms
survived in low water temperatures and high toxicity
levels of oil”
Extracted from: Michael Alley The Craft of Scientific Writing,
3rd edition (Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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39. Ambiguity
“The train left the station crowded and dirty.”
Better: “The train was crowded and dirty when it left the station”
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40. Ambiguity
Unclear Pronoun
Since the platform has a support system
connected to the equipment, it was mounted
inside the lab.
What was mounted inside the lab????
It = The platform or the support system??
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42. Sources
-Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition (SpringerVerlag, 1996).
Mathews, JR and and Mathews RW, Successful Scientific Writing, Cambridge
University Press; 3 edition 2007)
Dodd, J. S., Ed. The ACS Style Guide; American Chemical Society:
Washington, DC, 1986.).
Brawand et al., Nature, 2011, 478, 343
Urselmann, et al., IEEE Transactions on Evolutionary Computation, 15, 2011, 659
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44. Organização: Pró-Reitoria de Pesquisa - USP
Workshop de Capacitação em
Escrita Científica
Módulo 6
Prof. Dr. Valtencir Zucolotto
Laboratório de Nanomedicina e Nanotoxicologia
Instituto de Física de São Carlos, USP
USP, 2012
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45. Workshop Outline
Modulo 1: O Gênero Literário
Seções de Um Artigo Científico
Módulo 2: Estrutura 1: Abstract
Módulo 3: Estrutura 2: Introduction
Módulo 4: Estrutura 3: Results and Discussion, Conclusion
Módulo 5: Estilo
Linguagem 1: Especificidade, Complexidade e Ambiguidade
Módulo 6: Linguagem 2: Redundâncias, Ação no Verbo, Fluidez de
Texto, Ritmo de Escrita
Módulo 7: Linguagem 3: Plain English, Escrever em Inglês, Preposições
Módulo 8: Linguagem 4: Topic Sentences, Cover Letters, Final Remarks
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46. Módulo 6
Linguagem 2:
Redundâncias, Ação no Verbo, Fluidez da
Escrita, Ritmo de Escrita
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48. Redundancies
During the data collection phase of the study, all
experimental measurements were performed in a
period of time of 3 months. All the obtained results
were further analyzed and possible errors were
completely eliminated.
Adapted from Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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49. Redundancies
Better:
During the data collection, all measurements were
performed in 3 months. The results were further
analyzed and possible errors were eliminated.
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52. Redundancies
Common redundancies from Non-Native Speakers
Alternative choices
Basic fundamentals
Completely eliminate
Currently underway
Empty space
Introduced a new
Mix together
Never before
Period of time
Separate entities
Still persists
Quite unique
Very similar
Join together
Completely full
Obtained Results
Definitely proved
Exactly true
First of all
Adapted from Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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53. Strong Nouns
Strong nouns provide a “visual image” to the reader.
A short list of abstract nouns:
Ability, approach, capability, concept, environment,
factor, nature, parameter,….
Adapted from Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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54. Action in the verb
Não-Nativos tendem a “Substantivar”
os Verbos
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55. Strong Verbs
Replace verb phrases by the correspondent strong verb
Weak verb phrase
Made the arrangement for
Made the decision
Made the measurement of
Performed the development of
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Strong Verb
Arranged
Decided
Measured
Developed
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56. Action in the verb
“A continuous improvement in patient´s condition
was observed”
Better:
“Patient´s condition improved”
Adapted from Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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57. Action in the verb
Administration of dopamine produced a decrease
in the frequency of convulsions
Better:
Administration of dopamine decreased convulsions
frequency
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58. Action in the verb
The new phytotherapics exert their action by
blocking the cells communications.
Better:
The
new
phytotherapics
communications.
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59. Flow
A Clear and Effective Writing is made of Smooth
Transitions between Ideas, Sentences, Paragraphs
Problem: Complementary ideas disconnected and/or
placed far way from each other.
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60. Flow
The level of the proteins found in the blood samples
is similar to that observed by other researchers. Due to its
ability to form complexes with DNA and RNA, such proteins
had been extensively investigated by a number of research
groups, including the group from Harvard, which estimated
that the normal level of the protein in blood should be
around 1 mg/dL.
????
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61. Flow
Better:
The level of the proteins found in the blood
samples was 1 mg/dL, which is similar to that
observed by Harvard´s group.
The word which brings the ideas closer to
each other!
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62. Flow
Transitional words within a sentence
1) Reason:
Because, since, due to,….
Example: The size of the nanoparticles was ca. 5 nm
because of the synthetic route employed.
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63. Flow
Transitional words within a sentence
2) Consequence:
therefore, as a consequence,….
Example: The enzymes showed a high specificity to
pesticides, therefore allowing its use in biosensors.
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64. Flow
Transitional words within a sentence
3) Concession:
Although, even though, ….
Example: Although individual residues in the repeatedsequence blocks in the core have diverged, the
patterns of amino acids are identical.
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65. Flow
Smooth Transition between sentences
1) Continuation: Movement of ideas in the same
direction:
Examples:
Also;
Moreover;
first, second…;
In addition;
……..
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66. Flow
Smooth Transition between sentences
2) Pause:
Examples:
For example;
In other words;
…….
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67. Flow
Smooth Transition between sentences
3) Reversal: Movement of ideas reverses direction.
Examples:
However;
In contrast;
On the other hand;
Conversely;
Contrarily;
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68. Flow
Smooth Transition between sentences
4) Conclusion:
Examples:
In summary
Concluding
…….
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70. Flow
Sentence Openers: Rhythm
DNA sensing has been considered a powerful tool to diagnose cancer. Cancer
diagnosis is usually not straightforward due to a large number of pathologies
variations as well as to the very low amount of DNA molecules expressed in the
beginning of disease. Sensors capable of detecting specific types of tumoral
cells may represent a breakthrough in medicine. This paper describes the
development of special sensors for cancer detection. The sensors comprise
immobilized antibodies that recognizes specific types of proteins produced by
cancer cell. The sensor systems were produced using different immobilization
strategies. The results show that different types of cancer cells can be detected
at very low limits of detection. The experiments were carried out in triplicate.
The systems we developed will be evaluated in clinical trials in a few months.
Many medicine areas will benefit from our new technologies.
????
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71. Flow
Vary sentence openers
Topic of Sentence
Time of action
Location of action
Manner of action
Subordinate action
Reason for action
Subject
Prepositional Phrase
Prepositional Phrase
Adverb
Dependent Clause
Infinitive Phrase
Source: Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
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72. Flow
adverb
Recently, DNA sensors….
dependent clause
Although cancer diagnosis is not
straightforward ,….
infinitive phrase
To optimize the systems….
subject-verb
The results show that….
prepositional phrase
In a few months, the systems will
be….
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73. Flow
Recently, DNA sensing has been considered a powerful tool to diagnose cancer.
Although cancer diagnosis is not straightforward, due to a large number of
pathologies variations, this strategy may be very efficient for some cancer
types. Sensors capable of detecting specific types of tumoral cells may
represent a breakthrough in medicine. In this paper we describe the
development of special sensors for cancer detection. The sensors comprise
immobilized antibodies that recognizes specific types of proteins produced by
cancer cell. To optimize the systems, the sensor were produced using different
immobilization strategies. The results show that different types of cancer cells
can be detected at very low limits of detection. The experiments were carried
out in triplicate. In a few months, the systems will be evaluated in clinical
trials in a few months. Since highly sensitivity and specificity were achieved by
the sensors, clinical areas may benefit from our new technologies.
Rhythm !!!!
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74. Flow
Rewrite the following Abstract improving rhytm
The development of new antimicrobial peptides (AMPs) has arisen as a novel,
promising strategy to overcome the effects of antibiotic resistance developed
by several pathogens. The efficient design and development of such
biomolecules, however, requires an understanding of the mechanisms of
interactions between the peptides and cell membrane. In this study we
examined the interactions of the cationic antimicrobial peptide dermaseptin 01
with three membrane systems. The membrane systems had been
investigated in the form of Langmuir monolayers. The degree of interaction of
DS 01with the different biomembrane models was quantified from equilibrium
and dynamic liquid-air interface parameters, such as: minimum molecular
area and dilatational elasticity modulus. The interaction between DS 01 and
the zwitterionic phospholipid, as well as with the LRE-La monolayers were
very weak at low peptide concentrations, whereas with negatively charged
phospholipids the interactions were stronger. The latter is in agreement with
previous literature for vesicles and planar lipid bilayers, and with the greater
activity of AMPs against bacterial membranes, as compared to mammalian
cell membranes.
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75. Sources
-Michael Alley. The Craft of Scientific Writing, 3rd edition
(Springer-Verlag, 1996).
Science Research Writing for Non-Native Speakers of English, Hilary
Glasman-Deal, Imperial College Press, 2009
Mathews, JR and and Mathews RW, Successful Scientific Writing,
Cambridge University Press; 3 edition 2007)
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