While some believe that men and women are equally capable as parents, the document argues that women are generally better suited for child rearing. It claims that women are more familiar with domestic tasks from a young age, have a natural instinct for caring for children as demonstrated through pregnancy, and are typically gentler and more tolerant than men. Additionally, traditional gender roles mean that women have more opportunities to interact with children on a daily basis, while men are often viewed solely as financial providers.

1. Many people believe that women make better
parents than men and that is why they have the
greater role in raising children in most societies.
Others claim that men are just as good as women
at parenting. What is your opinion?

2. INTRODUCTION
In an era which the equitability between men
and women plays a fundamental part in our
daily life, it is believed that men are as good as
women in educating and taking care of children.
However, in my opinion, women have a greater
role which is irreplaceable in bringing up their
kids based on their familiarization with caring
for children, natural instinct of mothers and
their opportunity to contact with the children.

3. Firstly,
women have to get accustomed to cooking and taking
care of children much more than men do. Unlike men,
since they were teenage girls, they have been taught that
their future responsibility is to make diligent mothers, not
successful businesswomen. Furthermore, due to the
belief that women who are not good at domestic duties
will have difficulty in their family life, prodigious amounts
of pressure were brought to bear on them, and they have
to get themselves familiarized with household tasks such
as cooking, washing and bringing up children very early
so as to become good mothers.

4. Besides,
men who are in charge of preparing foods,
getting household tasks done or rush into the
market in the morning to buy food may be
regarded as ridiculous, which results in their
unwillingness to get themselves involved in such
tasks. Hence, they are usually overshadowed by
women in the role of parents

5. Secondly,
it is the women's nature that counts as an advantage in being
better parents. Obviously, women are gentler and more
tolerant than men, thanks to the close and sacred relationship
with their little angels from the very first day of pregnancy.
Hence, children may have a tendency to listen and confide
their personal problems to them without their being worried
and hesitant. Contrarily, there is always an unbridgeable gap
between the father and children in a family in view of their
conceiving their father as a strict and serious man, which also
makes children reluctant to open their hearts. In
consequence, women are considered not only better mothers
but also close friends or even outstanding psychologist by
their kids.

6. Last but not least,
women have more chances to contact with their kids. As you know, the
belief that the women's sole responsibility is to raise their children has
been deeply rooted in our society for many years. Men are sole
financial providers and have to work very hard to support family, and
thus projects deprive them of invaluable time to spend with children.
Their significant contribution to the family is undeniable, but in
educating and taking care of kids, their wives seem to outweigh them.
Not only do women have to work form morning till midnight to meet
deadlines, but they also spend much time caring for children about
physical and emotional aspects. Even if the husband is on his business
trip, delicious meals are always ready and assignments are forced to be
finished before going to school, thanks to the "super" mother!

7. In conclusion,
although men are able to try their best, women
still outweigh them in terms of taking on child
rearing.