4. The Writing Process
Stages of the Writing Process:
– Prewrite
– Draft
– Revise
– Edit
– Publish
– This is a recursive process. Most writers move
back and forth among the stages
7. Graphic organizers
• Graphic organizers in the composing process
– Prewriting
– Drafting
• See links on this week’s Sakai page:
– Graphic organizers for writing
– Graphic organizers for reading
8. Haiku for winter
Frosty winter’s day
Bare white limbs on creaking trees
Imperfection, grace
What are the features of haiku as a text form?
9. Haiku as a Text Form
• Line 1: 5 syllables
• Line 2: 7 syllables
• Line 3: 5 syllables
10. Twitter as a Text Form
• How would you describe the features &
conventions of a tweet?
• How does a tweet differ in purpose from other
text forms such as an email or blog post?
11. Chris Hadfield Tweet from Space
• Original tweet: “Mining town in northern
China – the open pits gleam with blue from
space”
• As haiku poem:
Northern China mines (5)
Open pits gleam blue from space (7)
Rich reserves of ore (5)
15. Your Task
• Pic Collage app on iPads
• Select a Chris Hadfield tweet from space
(handout)
– Rewrite it to fit the haiku form (5/7/5)
– Conduct any research needed to clarify the tweet
– Using Pic Collage:
• Select appropriate online images and arrange as a collage
• Select a background
• Type the haiku into a text box
• Save to photos
16. Ontario Curriculum
• How does this poetry/media activity address
specific expectations in the Ontario
Curriculum: Language?
– Consider more than one strand
• Media Studies
• Writing
• Reading
• What other subject areas are also addressed?
17. School Context
• If I were to replicate the PicCollage activity in a
Junior classroom, what further supports or
steps would I have to consider?
18. Listen to Your Life
Listen to your life. See it for the fathomless
mystery that it is. In the boredom and pain of it
no less than in the excitement and gladness:
touch, taste, smell your way to the holy and
hidden heart of it because in the last analysis all
moments are key moments, and life itself is
grace.
Frederick Beuchner, Listening to Your Life, p.2
21. Writing
• 1. Generate, gather, and
organize ideas and
information to write for an
intended purpose and
audience
• 3. Use editing, proofreading,
and publishing skills and
strategies, and knowledge of
language conventions, to
correct errors, refine
expression, and present their
work effectively
• 2. Draft and revise their
writing, using a variety of
informational, literary, and
graphic forms and stylistic
elements appropriate for the
purpose and audience
• 4. Reflect on and identify
their strengths as writers,
areas for improvement, and
the strategies they found
most helpful at different
stages in the writing process
What we think the writing process is … (think it’s a sequential activity)
What the writing process actually is…
https://blogs.montclair.edu/cwe/2013/04/18/perfecting-your-writing-process-a-lot-of-writing-and-a-little-dancing/