As part of a presentation class taught at Kanazawa Technical College, students and the teacher create a collaborative presentation using statistics from the Village of 100, a bilingual book published in 2001. Each student is responsible for representing a statistic visually with a photograph to elicit and emotional response, and with an appropriate graph. The focus is on simple slides, with some consistency throughout. Not included here is the film version, where students present their slides to the camera one after the other.
Good simple graph and colors. You need to add a title, like “The Age of the Village,” or “Age in the Village of 100.” And, make graph labels bigger with some text size contrast.
Great photo, text and contrast. Be careful of stretching though.
Does this slide look like it goes with the photo slide? Does it have similar colors? Can you read the labels? Where’s the title?
Make text larger – at least the number 9.
Delete graph outlines and make text larger. Create some contrast with the text labels and title.
Why don’t you choose a more neutral color for your background that is consistent with the photo slide? Like light grey? It’s best to avoid putting colors like pink and red together, because we don’t get a good contrast. Nice contrast between labels and graph, but perhaps make the text a bit larger and create some contrast between title text and label text. Please delete graph outlines as well.