Scene One: Backstory to the Narrators Story
1. Narrator: where should i start well i guess i should start from
where it all began my childhood I only remember a small part of it
most of it is just filled with dark memories of my parents being
murdered i remember hearing a lot of screaming and seeing a lot of
blood on that night

2. SFX: A Woman Screaming while she's being stabbed (Blood Splatter SFX)

3. Narrator: There is only one memory that i remember of parents its
them taking me to a park to play on a swing heh thinking about it
makes me wonder how my life would of turned out if my parents didn't
die and if i didn't go into



SFX: (A Flashback Sound) A Swing creaking sound

4. Narrator: But even when I have these flashbacks i can never see
their faces their always blacked out its probably because i don't
have any pictures of them and when i do try to remember them i get
the same scene of my mother being stabbed to death, but let me tell
you my story.



SFX: Swooosh!

5. Background Noise: Cars Driving on a busy street





6. Narrator: As i was told my parents ran away from their parents
because they didn't let them be together so as a child of the
forbidden love neither of the families wanted to take me in i
remember this day when i was attacked by some school kids cause i
asked them for some change they tried to beat on me since they were
some kind of bullies



SFX: A lot of punches 

7. Narrator: I remember i was in a corner and i couldn't defend myself
anymore and in the distance i heard footsteps and then he said



SFX: Loud Foot steps 

8. Old Man: Oi oi oi whats going on here

9. Thug Kid Leader: What’re you doing here old man beat it

10.Thug Kid 2: Yeah you better leave before you get what this kid is
getting

11.Thug Kid 3: Yeah you better o…or else

12.Old Man: Well you can try if you want but id advise against it

13.Thug Kid Leader: Lets get him boys 

14.Narrator: Because i was covering my face i couldn't really see what
was going on but a lot of punching and screaming

SFX:Punching SFX

15.Narrator: and the last thing i heard was one of them saying “Lets get
out of here” and a devilish laugh and then i saw a shadow cover me
and ask

16.Old man: Are you alright 

17.Narrator: As i uncovered my face i saw a figure standing over me with
his hand reached out to me as i took it he helped me stand up as i
stood up i heard a faint voice in the distance

18.Faint Voice: Masutā ……… Masutā Where are you 

19.Old Man: Shigeru over here

20.Shigeru: Masutā why did you leave the limo i was gone for a couple of
seconds and when i come back you were gone

21.Narrator: I kept hearing him call the old man master and i remember
me wondering who he was

22.Old Man: I heard something going on here so i came to check it out

23.Shigeru: Well don’t do that again this isn't the best neighbourhood
and something might happen to you, well whatever lets get going we’re
going to be late for dinner
24.Old Man: Alright well lets get going then
25.Kazuo Aoaka: Thank you sir

26.Old man: So What’s your name kid



SFX:Car Door Closes

27. Kazuo Aoaka: Friends call me Kazuo, Kazuo Aoaka

28. Old man: So Kazuo why are you living on the street?

29.Kazuo Aoaka: Well you see my family was killed when i was very young
and i’ve been living on the street’s ever since because none of my
other families want to take me in, So i’ve been working hard so that
i can get my revenge on that person.

30.Old Man: Well Kazuo your so young but you had a life worse than most
can imagine, I know this sounds strange but would you like to come
live with me, I’d train you so that you may get your revenge on the
person who killed your parents.

31.Kazuo Aoaka: Wow Really Mister?

32.Old Man: Of Course but be warned your training will be hard you have
to give up everything your friends & Your life for the next 10 years
do you think you have what it takes?

33.Kazuo Aoaka: If i get a chance to get revenge on the person who
killed my parents then yes

34.Old Man: Well then… Get in and lets get started



SFX:Door Closing

35.Kazuo Aoaka: So what do i call you mister?



SFX:Engine Start

36.Old Man: Ah well… You can call me Noboru

37.Kazuo Aoaka: Thank you Nob i will repay you with suc for this one day



SFX: Car Driving Off

38.Narrator: And this is how my revenge quest started this is the
foundation to what i’ve been looking for i will find him and i will
ask him the question that’s tormented me my who life Why?.




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  • 1.
    Scene One: Backstoryto the Narrators Story 1. Narrator: where should i start well i guess i should start from where it all began my childhood I only remember a small part of it most of it is just filled with dark memories of my parents being murdered i remember hearing a lot of screaming and seeing a lot of blood on that night
 2. SFX: A Woman Screaming while she's being stabbed (Blood Splatter SFX)
 3. Narrator: There is only one memory that i remember of parents its them taking me to a park to play on a swing heh thinking about it makes me wonder how my life would of turned out if my parents didn't die and if i didn't go into
 
 SFX: (A Flashback Sound) A Swing creaking sound
 4. Narrator: But even when I have these flashbacks i can never see their faces their always blacked out its probably because i don't have any pictures of them and when i do try to remember them i get the same scene of my mother being stabbed to death, but let me tell you my story.
 
 SFX: Swooosh!
 5. Background Noise: Cars Driving on a busy street
 
 

  • 2.
    6. Narrator: Asi was told my parents ran away from their parents because they didn't let them be together so as a child of the forbidden love neither of the families wanted to take me in i remember this day when i was attacked by some school kids cause i asked them for some change they tried to beat on me since they were some kind of bullies
 
 SFX: A lot of punches 
 7. Narrator: I remember i was in a corner and i couldn't defend myself anymore and in the distance i heard footsteps and then he said
 
 SFX: Loud Foot steps 
 8. Old Man: Oi oi oi whats going on here
 9. Thug Kid Leader: What’re you doing here old man beat it
 10.Thug Kid 2: Yeah you better leave before you get what this kid is getting
 11.Thug Kid 3: Yeah you better o…or else
 12.Old Man: Well you can try if you want but id advise against it
 13.Thug Kid Leader: Lets get him boys 
 14.Narrator: Because i was covering my face i couldn't really see what was going on but a lot of punching and screaming

  • 3.
    SFX:Punching SFX
 15.Narrator: andthe last thing i heard was one of them saying “Lets get out of here” and a devilish laugh and then i saw a shadow cover me and ask
 16.Old man: Are you alright 
 17.Narrator: As i uncovered my face i saw a figure standing over me with his hand reached out to me as i took it he helped me stand up as i stood up i heard a faint voice in the distance
 18.Faint Voice: Masutā ……… Masutā Where are you 
 19.Old Man: Shigeru over here
 20.Shigeru: Masutā why did you leave the limo i was gone for a couple of seconds and when i come back you were gone
 21.Narrator: I kept hearing him call the old man master and i remember me wondering who he was
 22.Old Man: I heard something going on here so i came to check it out
 23.Shigeru: Well don’t do that again this isn't the best neighbourhood and something might happen to you, well whatever lets get going we’re going to be late for dinner 24.Old Man: Alright well lets get going then
  • 4.
    25.Kazuo Aoaka: Thankyou sir
 26.Old man: So What’s your name kid
 
 SFX:Car Door Closes
 27. Kazuo Aoaka: Friends call me Kazuo, Kazuo Aoaka
 28. Old man: So Kazuo why are you living on the street?
 29.Kazuo Aoaka: Well you see my family was killed when i was very young and i’ve been living on the street’s ever since because none of my other families want to take me in, So i’ve been working hard so that i can get my revenge on that person.
 30.Old Man: Well Kazuo your so young but you had a life worse than most can imagine, I know this sounds strange but would you like to come live with me, I’d train you so that you may get your revenge on the person who killed your parents.
 31.Kazuo Aoaka: Wow Really Mister?
 32.Old Man: Of Course but be warned your training will be hard you have to give up everything your friends & Your life for the next 10 years do you think you have what it takes?
 33.Kazuo Aoaka: If i get a chance to get revenge on the person who killed my parents then yes

  • 5.
    34.Old Man: Wellthen… Get in and lets get started
 
 SFX:Door Closing
 35.Kazuo Aoaka: So what do i call you mister?
 
 SFX:Engine Start
 36.Old Man: Ah well… You can call me Noboru
 37.Kazuo Aoaka: Thank you Nob i will repay you with suc for this one day
 
 SFX: Car Driving Off
 38.Narrator: And this is how my revenge quest started this is the foundation to what i’ve been looking for i will find him and i will ask him the question that’s tormented me my who life Why?.