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Contents
1. LO4
2. Contents
3. Environment of Presentation
4. Evidence of Pitch
5. Survey Monkey Evidence
Environment of Presentation
Evidence of Pitch
Survey Monkey Evidence
https://www.surveymonkey.com/analyze/Vy5C
_2FntC2WMR2UPJoSkiD_2FVXzmAbm_2BhM2
kOJXza3C28_3D
Overall the majority of
people thought that my
pitch was rated at a 8/10.
This could be improved as
shown in the next slide.
Survey Monkey Evidence
https://www.surveymonkey.com/analyze/Vy5C
_2FntC2WMR2UPJoSkiD_2FVXzmAbm_2BhM2
kOJXza3C28_3D
One way that the pitch
could be improved is
through going into more
detail. This is because I was
mainly reading off of slides
and did not, therefore
provide enough detail of
the target audience.
Another way was through
changing my speech clarity
and speed of pace.
Survey Monkey Evidence
https://www.surveymonkey.com/analyze/Vy5C
_2FntC2WMR2UPJoSkiD_2FVXzmAbm_2BhM2
kOJXza3C28_3D
The front cover had some
changes that could be
made.
The main idea was to add
more to the cover lines and
make them stand out
more, in a neater way.
Survey Monkey Evidence
https://www.surveymonkey.com/analyze/Vy5C
_2FntC2WMR2UPJoSkiD_2FVXzmAbm_2BhM2
kOJXza3C28_3D
The DPS had some changes
that could be made.
The suggestions were to
add more text and content
on both pages and allow
the page to have little
white space.
Survey Monkey Evidence
https://www.surveymonkey.com/analyze/Vy5C
_2FntC2WMR2UPJoSkiD_2FVXzmAbm_2BhM2
kOJXza3C28_3D
The back cover had some
changes that could be
made.
The idea that stood out to
me was to make the back
page a promotion. This
would add more to the
page than just a quote.

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Unit 13 LO4