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First impression. 
Connection. 
Frontline.
Pay attention to language.
Be genuine about who 
you really are.
And this above 
all, to thine own 
self be true. 
(Hamlet, William Shakespeare)
Know the legitimate value 
of what you provide.
Have insights based on 
research and analysis.
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Listen actively, consider 
carefully and respond 
succinctly.
Avoid sales speak
Limit prepositions
Avoid very
Absolute 
Amazing 
Awesome 
Fabulou 
s 
Fantastic 
Incredible 
Magnificent 
Real Te 
rrific W 
onderful
Watch out for forms of the 
verb “to be” 
(am, are, is, was, were, being and been)
Don’t try to impress with 
jargon or big words.
Proofread 
1 | Understand message 
2 | Check readability, clarity, 
unity, conciseness 
3 | Check style and format 
4 | Safeguard message
Have a specific decision 
in mind.
Start with your 
conclusion.
Provide your supporting 
argument in chunks.
Bolster each argument 
with evidence.
Repeat your conclusion 
as a “call to action.”
Include the benefit in the 
subject line.
Asking for intro? 
Explicit ask 
Compelling context 
Boost credibility 
Appreciation 
Template email
Asking for feedback? 
Show that you know them 
Make request specific 
Make request easy 
to answer
Asking for a meeting? 
Offer value 
Explain context 
Ask for small amount of time 
Make it convenient for them 
Recognize their time
What business need will the right 
person solve? 
How to measure success to recognize 
a top performer? 
Common attributes of top performers? 
Why would performer want this job?
BRAND VISION 
Doing the most good. 
BRAND PERSONALITY 
Passionate // Compassionate // Brave 
Uplifting // Trustworthy.
BRAND POSITIONING 
To those who want to positively affect 
their world, The Salvation Army is the 
charity that maximizes contributions. 
BRAND AFFILIATION 
Informed individuals who want to 
positively affect their world.
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Business Writing - New Frontier Writing Workshop