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INT. DEPARTMENT STORE - DAY

Holiday MUZAK plays over the store speakers, filling the area
with a false sense of merriment.

DAREN, a strapping young man in his twenties, stands over a
round table filled with dozens of ties.

He picks up a red striped tie and looks at it in the light.
Shakes his head and puts it back down, but as he does he sees
the young woman behind the checkout counter looking at him.
They smile at each other for a moment and then both return to
what they were doing.

                       GRACE (O.C.)
          Excuse me?

DAREN doesn’t move at first. GRACE, an older woman in her
sixties, is standing just behind DAREN with a cart full of
items.

                    GRACE (CONT’D)
          Excuse me, young man?

DAREN realizes she is talking to him and turns around a bit
startled.

                       DAREN
          Yes?

                    GRACE
          I’m so sorry to bother you.

                       DAREN
          It’s okay.

                    GRACE
          This is a little embarrassing for me, but
          I was just suddenly struck with ...
              (She begins to get chocked up)
          ... It has just been so hard.

                     DAREN
              (Getting uncomfortable)
          I’m sorry?

                    GRACE
          The reason I have so rudely came up to
          you is, because of your resemblance to my
          son.

                     DAREN
              (Confused)
          O ... kay?

                                                  (CONTINUED)
2.
CONTINUED:


                        GRACE
             The thing is, he recently died in
             Afghanistan. One of those horrid
             roadside things.
                 (Tears begin to well in her
                  eyes)

                       DAREN
             Wow, um ... I’m so sorry to hear that.

                       GRACE
             I feel so bad imposing on you like this.
                 (She begins to cry)
             But I was ... wondering ... hoping
             really. That you might ...
                 (Her breathing begins to
                  quicken)
             might say ... “Good bye, Mom” as I ...
                 (Trying to calm herself)
             As I walk away.

                       DAREN
                 (Quite uneasy, but feeling the
                  woman’s pain)
             Sure, I guess so.

                       GRACE
             That is so wonderful to hear.

Without warning she gives him a hug and he hesitantly hugs
her back. After a moment she releases him and wipes the
tears from her eyes and smiles.

She takes a few steps away and turns back to him with a
smile.

                       DAREN
                 (Waving)
             Good bye, mom.
                 (Thinking for a moment)
             I love you!

GRACE turns and walks directly to the checkout counter where
the young woman is stationed.

DAREN returns to the ties.

INT. DEPARTMENT STORE - MOMENTS LATER

DAREN is still contemplating the ties.




                                                        (CONTINUED)
3.
CONTINUED:


                       BECKY (O.C.)
             For you or your dad?

DAREN looks up from the tie and sees BECKY, the woman from
the checkout counter, looking at him from across the table.
BECKY is in her twenties and quite beautiful.

                       DAREN
             For me. I have a company holiday party
             to go to in a few weeks and I thought ...
             maybe a new tie would be a good plan.

                       BECKY
             Can I make a suggestion?

                          DAREN
             Please do.

                       BECKY
             You need something that brings out your
             eyes.

                       DAREN
             Sounds good to me.

                       BECKY
             So ... lets take a look at your eyes.
                 (Looking in to his eyes)
             Stunning green, is a phrase that comes to
             mind.

                       DAREN
                 (A little embarrassed)
             Thanks.

                       BECKY
             Who said green eyes were a good thing?

                          DAREN
             Oh ... um

                       BECKY
                 (Smiling)
             I’m just kidding, I think green eyes are
             great.
                 (Looking down at the table)
             Green eyes call for a green tie. Which
             is also festive, so it has a duel
             purpose.

BECKY picks up a few green ties and holds them up to DAREN
and thinks for a moment and then makes a decision.


                                                        (CONTINUED)
4.
CONTINUED: (2)


                    BECKY (CONT’D)
          This one is perfect.
              (Holding a striped one out
               toward him)

                       DAREN
          Thank you.

                    BECKY
          You are very welcome.

                    DAREN
          I guess this is all I need.

BECKY turns back toward the counter and DAREN follows after
her.

At the counter BECKY picks up a stray receipt that is lying
on the register and scans it. She takes the tie and scans it
as well.

                    BECKY
          I think it’s really sweet.

                       DAREN
                 (Confused)
          Oh?

                    BECKY
          What you are doing for your mother, it
          shows how much you care.

                    DAREN
          Yes I care ... wait what?

                     BECKY
          It’s nice.
              (She looks at the register
               screen)
          That will be one thousand and forty-seven
          dollars and thirteen cents.
              (She looks up from the register
               with a wide smile)

                    DAREN
              (Startled by the amount)
          That must be some really great tie.

                    BECKY
          Yea, it’s nice.




                                                   (CONTINUED)
5.
CONTINUED: (3)


                    DAREN
          I’m not sure it’s one thousand and forty-
          seven dollars nice?

                    BECKY
          Nope, but that stuff you bought for your
          mother’s new house. Really generous of
          you, after the divorce and everything. I
          really admire that.

                    DAREN
          Wait, wait, wait ... did that woman say
          she was my mother?

                    BECKY
          It was pretty obvious.

                    DAREN
              (Realizing what is going on)
          And she said I was going to pay ...

                    BECKY
          Yeap, like I said really generous of you.

                    DAREN
          She isn’t my mother.

                    BECKY
          That’s not very nice to say.

                    DAREN
          No, I mean she really IS NOT my mother.
          She just screwed us?

                    BECKY
              (Looking around confused)
          What?

                                                FADE TO BLACK.

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The Shopping Scam

  • 1. INT. DEPARTMENT STORE - DAY Holiday MUZAK plays over the store speakers, filling the area with a false sense of merriment. DAREN, a strapping young man in his twenties, stands over a round table filled with dozens of ties. He picks up a red striped tie and looks at it in the light. Shakes his head and puts it back down, but as he does he sees the young woman behind the checkout counter looking at him. They smile at each other for a moment and then both return to what they were doing. GRACE (O.C.) Excuse me? DAREN doesn’t move at first. GRACE, an older woman in her sixties, is standing just behind DAREN with a cart full of items. GRACE (CONT’D) Excuse me, young man? DAREN realizes she is talking to him and turns around a bit startled. DAREN Yes? GRACE I’m so sorry to bother you. DAREN It’s okay. GRACE This is a little embarrassing for me, but I was just suddenly struck with ... (She begins to get chocked up) ... It has just been so hard. DAREN (Getting uncomfortable) I’m sorry? GRACE The reason I have so rudely came up to you is, because of your resemblance to my son. DAREN (Confused) O ... kay? (CONTINUED)
  • 2. 2. CONTINUED: GRACE The thing is, he recently died in Afghanistan. One of those horrid roadside things. (Tears begin to well in her eyes) DAREN Wow, um ... I’m so sorry to hear that. GRACE I feel so bad imposing on you like this. (She begins to cry) But I was ... wondering ... hoping really. That you might ... (Her breathing begins to quicken) might say ... “Good bye, Mom” as I ... (Trying to calm herself) As I walk away. DAREN (Quite uneasy, but feeling the woman’s pain) Sure, I guess so. GRACE That is so wonderful to hear. Without warning she gives him a hug and he hesitantly hugs her back. After a moment she releases him and wipes the tears from her eyes and smiles. She takes a few steps away and turns back to him with a smile. DAREN (Waving) Good bye, mom. (Thinking for a moment) I love you! GRACE turns and walks directly to the checkout counter where the young woman is stationed. DAREN returns to the ties. INT. DEPARTMENT STORE - MOMENTS LATER DAREN is still contemplating the ties. (CONTINUED)
  • 3. 3. CONTINUED: BECKY (O.C.) For you or your dad? DAREN looks up from the tie and sees BECKY, the woman from the checkout counter, looking at him from across the table. BECKY is in her twenties and quite beautiful. DAREN For me. I have a company holiday party to go to in a few weeks and I thought ... maybe a new tie would be a good plan. BECKY Can I make a suggestion? DAREN Please do. BECKY You need something that brings out your eyes. DAREN Sounds good to me. BECKY So ... lets take a look at your eyes. (Looking in to his eyes) Stunning green, is a phrase that comes to mind. DAREN (A little embarrassed) Thanks. BECKY Who said green eyes were a good thing? DAREN Oh ... um BECKY (Smiling) I’m just kidding, I think green eyes are great. (Looking down at the table) Green eyes call for a green tie. Which is also festive, so it has a duel purpose. BECKY picks up a few green ties and holds them up to DAREN and thinks for a moment and then makes a decision. (CONTINUED)
  • 4. 4. CONTINUED: (2) BECKY (CONT’D) This one is perfect. (Holding a striped one out toward him) DAREN Thank you. BECKY You are very welcome. DAREN I guess this is all I need. BECKY turns back toward the counter and DAREN follows after her. At the counter BECKY picks up a stray receipt that is lying on the register and scans it. She takes the tie and scans it as well. BECKY I think it’s really sweet. DAREN (Confused) Oh? BECKY What you are doing for your mother, it shows how much you care. DAREN Yes I care ... wait what? BECKY It’s nice. (She looks at the register screen) That will be one thousand and forty-seven dollars and thirteen cents. (She looks up from the register with a wide smile) DAREN (Startled by the amount) That must be some really great tie. BECKY Yea, it’s nice. (CONTINUED)
  • 5. 5. CONTINUED: (3) DAREN I’m not sure it’s one thousand and forty- seven dollars nice? BECKY Nope, but that stuff you bought for your mother’s new house. Really generous of you, after the divorce and everything. I really admire that. DAREN Wait, wait, wait ... did that woman say she was my mother? BECKY It was pretty obvious. DAREN (Realizing what is going on) And she said I was going to pay ... BECKY Yeap, like I said really generous of you. DAREN She isn’t my mother. BECKY That’s not very nice to say. DAREN No, I mean she really IS NOT my mother. She just screwed us? BECKY (Looking around confused) What? FADE TO BLACK.