18. Self-editing: a checklist
Structure
Length
Clarity
Grammar,
punctuation, spelling
Formatting
Language
Fact-checking
Typos
Subheadings and title
Proof read
19. FIRST READ: Structure, length, clarity
• Is it in the right order?
• Intro should grab the reader’s attention / clarify
what the piece is about
• Could it be shorter?
• Simplify
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21. Self-editing: a checklist
Structure
Length
Clarity
Grammar, punctuation,
spelling
Formatting
Language
Fact-checking
Typos
Subheadings and title
Proof read
25. Self-editing: a checklist
Structure
Length
Clarity
Grammar, punctuation,
spelling
Formatting
Language
Fact-checking
Typos
Subheadings and title
Proof read
26. Typos, subheadings and title – then
PROOF
• Typos creep in during editing process
• Sub-heads should keep you reading
• Does the title still match the piece?
27. Self-editing: a checklist
Structure
Length
Clarity
Grammar,
punctuation, spelling
Formatting
Language
Fact-checking
Typos
Subheadings and title
Proof read
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29. How to self edit
• Step away from the laptop
• Read. Don’t touch!
• Follow the checklist
• Be honest with yourself
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31. Example – rough draft
They say you come to Aspen and Snowmass for the
Winter, but stay for the Summer – an old adage
that I think proves true time & time again!! While
the awesome region is famed for it’s world-class
Winter sports – celebrites like Rihanna and even
Michele Obama have graced the slopes here – the
warmer months hold more than enough
adventures to be had by land, water and air.
32. Example – edits
They say you come to Aspen and Snowmass for the
Winter, but stay for the Summer – an old adage
that I think proves true time & time again!! While
the awesome region is famed for it’s world-class
Winter sports – celebrites like Rihanna and even
Michele Obama have graced the slopes here – the
warmer months hold more than enough
adventures to be had by land, water and air.
33. Example – final version
They say you come to Aspen and Snowmass for the
winter, but stay for the summer – an old adage
that proves true time and time again. While the
region is famed for its world-class winter sports –
celebrities like Rihanna and even Michelle Obama
have graced the slopes here – the warmer months
hold more than enough adventures to be had by
land, water and air.
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35. Resources and skills development
• Style guides (Guardian, Chicago Manual, Nat Geo, Economist etc.)
• Oxford Dictionaries (oxforddictionaries.com)
• Books (For Who the Bell Tolls, David Marsh; The Elements of Style,
Strunk & White; On Writing, Stephen King)
• Grammar Girl (quickanddirtytips.com/grammar-girl)
• Read travel writing
• Ask a mentor or peer for feedback
• Go on a course
36. • Why self-editing is necessary
• When to self edit
• How to self edit
• Resources and skills development
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39. Self-editing: a checklist
Structure
Length
Clarity
Grammar,
punctuation, spelling
Formatting
Language
Fact-checking
Typos
Subheadings and title
Proof read