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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?

Those articles main idea is how to use car navigation. It get information by GPS. If I want to start it,
I have to turn on the car navigation system. The I must choice root which I want to go. Then I will
hear voice from car navigation system. And if I obey that sound, I can arrive at point where I want
to go.Thus, the car navigation is easy and useful for us.


2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

I think that the section is separated step by step. It is easy for us to read and understand what author
want to show. And section is colored. So it is looked easily. The section is written big size letter to
separate sentence. If it is not used, we may mistake sentence for section. So it is written clearly.
And the section is written shorter. These reasons, I think that these articles are easy to read for
many people.

3. What details are included in the articles?


These articles are written about car navigation. For example, Using the Up and Down keys on the
remote control, select how you want the system to find your route. This is means that if we select
goal, car navigation will tell us how root is good. And this articles tell us step by step how use car
navigation. So we can understand and read easily. Then, we can get and understand more very
useful information.

4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

There is noting point not to understand point. These articles are summarized, so I can read and
understand these articles in a moment. Because these articles are very easy to read and understand, I
think that these articles have not point to fix. And these articles are written step by step. So we can
read these easily. I think that these articles is easy to read and understand what they want to say for
us.

5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

I think that the point which is written good in these articles is color of step by step point. It is useful
for us to understand what author want to say. And if there is it, we can read and understand easily
and rapidly. Another point which is good is separated paragraph. Because these are separated about
sections, it is easy for us to understand and read. Thus, there are many good point in articles. I think
that these articles is easy to read and under stand.


6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

I think that there are no error in these articles. Because these articles are easy to read and
understand. So if we read it, we can get much information from these articles. And we can read it
casually. Because these articles are written easy word. So we can read it casually. Then, we can get
useful information form these articles. Thus, I think that these articles is written appropriate. So we
can read it easily and understand.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?

If I improve these articles, I will color word which is important word in articles. If it is done, we can
read these articles more easily and understand. And I think that there is no point to improve these
articles. Because these articles are written politely, we can read it easily and understand. Thus, I
think these articles is complete. So I think that there is no point in these articles no more.


8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

First point is that one article is colored. So we can read it easily. But I think that if we print it, we
cost more money to print black and white only. Second point is that one article is written step by
step. It is easy for us to read and understand. Because when we read manual, we will see step first
time. So these article is easy to read. Third point is that there are many paragraph. It may do it
which is easy to read.
9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.

One point is that this video say that GPS is working by pare. Because GPS has to catch our place, it
is used satellite machine. And it use cell phone. Then cellphone location is used GPS location. And
GPS is can catch weather which is located cell phone. So we can get newer information of weather.
Ifon has these technique. And it has many options. For example, it can record our voice. It is useful
for us to want to record voice. And it can say one more what you did record. If it is done, our life is
more easily. The Ifon can use photo. It is useful. Because the Ifon can move any other place, when
we want to take a picture we can photo in that time.

10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.
This video show that how GPS is good. It is in Iphon. And it can zoom up of map. It is good for
us to find place where we want to go. Iphon have many functions. For example, it can see many
rate which are serching site rate. It is useful for author to search that how serching site is used. I
think that the Iphon is very useul cellphon. Because it has many functions, we can do many things.
For example, we can do email and talk. And it has many free softwear. So if we have short free
time, we can do it in short time. It is used map by GPS. Because it has useful GPS map, we will
not mistake. And we can go to place which we want to go.

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  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? Those articles main idea is how to use car navigation. It get information by GPS. If I want to start it, I have to turn on the car navigation system. The I must choice root which I want to go. Then I will hear voice from car navigation system. And if I obey that sound, I can arrive at point where I want to go.Thus, the car navigation is easy and useful for us. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think that the section is separated step by step. It is easy for us to read and understand what author want to show. And section is colored. So it is looked easily. The section is written big size letter to separate sentence. If it is not used, we may mistake sentence for section. So it is written clearly. And the section is written shorter. These reasons, I think that these articles are easy to read for many people. 3. What details are included in the articles? These articles are written about car navigation. For example, Using the Up and Down keys on the remote control, select how you want the system to find your route. This is means that if we select goal, car navigation will tell us how root is good. And this articles tell us step by step how use car navigation. So we can understand and read easily. Then, we can get and understand more very useful information. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? There is noting point not to understand point. These articles are summarized, so I can read and understand these articles in a moment. Because these articles are very easy to read and understand, I think that these articles have not point to fix. And these articles are written step by step. So we can read these easily. I think that these articles is easy to read and understand what they want to say for us. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think that the point which is written good in these articles is color of step by step point. It is useful for us to understand what author want to say. And if there is it, we can read and understand easily and rapidly. Another point which is good is separated paragraph. Because these are separated about sections, it is easy for us to understand and read. Thus, there are many good point in articles. I think that these articles is easy to read and under stand. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? I think that there are no error in these articles. Because these articles are easy to read and understand. So if we read it, we can get much information from these articles. And we can read it casually. Because these articles are written easy word. So we can read it casually. Then, we can get useful information form these articles. Thus, I think that these articles is written appropriate. So we can read it easily and understand.
  • 2. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? If I improve these articles, I will color word which is important word in articles. If it is done, we can read these articles more easily and understand. And I think that there is no point to improve these articles. Because these articles are written politely, we can read it easily and understand. Thus, I think these articles is complete. So I think that there is no point in these articles no more. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). First point is that one article is colored. So we can read it easily. But I think that if we print it, we cost more money to print black and white only. Second point is that one article is written step by step. It is easy for us to read and understand. Because when we read manual, we will see step first time. So these article is easy to read. Third point is that there are many paragraph. It may do it which is easy to read. 9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. One point is that this video say that GPS is working by pare. Because GPS has to catch our place, it is used satellite machine. And it use cell phone. Then cellphone location is used GPS location. And GPS is can catch weather which is located cell phone. So we can get newer information of weather. Ifon has these technique. And it has many options. For example, it can record our voice. It is useful for us to want to record voice. And it can say one more what you did record. If it is done, our life is more easily. The Ifon can use photo. It is useful. Because the Ifon can move any other place, when we want to take a picture we can photo in that time. 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. This video show that how GPS is good. It is in Iphon. And it can zoom up of map. It is good for us to find place where we want to go. Iphon have many functions. For example, it can see many rate which are serching site rate. It is useful for author to search that how serching site is used. I think that the Iphon is very useul cellphon. Because it has many functions, we can do many things. For example, we can do email and talk. And it has many free softwear. So if we have short free time, we can do it in short time. It is used map by GPS. Because it has useful GPS map, we will not mistake. And we can go to place which we want to go.