This document compares changes between drafts of a film project. It notes that the distribution company was changed to an independent one for issues raised. The filming location was also changed from Kensal Green station to Langley station to avoid risks of filming without permission. Several shots were adjusted for better framing, including ensuring the camera was straight and hands were not cut off. The dance scene was altered so the character hears knocking and hides rather than being caught by her mother opening the door.

1. (Draft 2 – Draft 3)

2. At first we used a large conglomerate
company
We changed to an independent distribution, as it is
more applicable, for the issues raised in our opening
sequence
In our first and second draft we used
Kensal green station as our location We changed our location to Langley train station,
as their are no workers, and we wont risk getting
caught filming, without permission
The camera wasn't straight, and the shot was
slanted
For draft 3 we made sure the camera was
straight
Draft 1 Draft 2

3. My hands were partly cut
of, which is bad framing
Here we made sure my
hands weren't cut of, so we
had better framing
Jodie looking at computer, then close up of
words
Reverse shot of me looking
at words
Computer scene
Draft 1 Draft 2

4. While Jodie's dancing, her mum is close to door Jodie's mum is filmed, from sitting in the
living room to build more tension as she
walks towards room.
Jodie's mum opens door, while Jodie is
dancing. We changed it to Jodie hears mum
knocking and hides behind door
Camera didn't tilt down, as Jodie slides down
door. The camera, tilted down, but not perfectly
Dance sceneDraft 1 Draft 2