1. A2Photography Assessment:Unit 3 Coursework Portfolio
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UNIT 3
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GRADE:
PRESENT
AO1
TOTAL:
RECORD
UNITS:
UNIT 3
TEACHER(S):Mr Holden/Ms Carey
COMMENTS:
Shelby you have produced some very interesting work the experiment processes involved
with the different items especially the pigs head are strong. There are a number of things
that you have to revisit it improve the project I have listed them below. As the project
progresses you must make sure to write exactly where you are going and why at the
moment there are lots of visuals but not enough written explanations. The interim final
piece needs to be refined dramatically I have again listed the improvements below. You
must make sure that all artists you look at have at least one image analysed in detail and
then connected to your own visual practise.
Tasks
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Personal Project
EXPERIMENT
CANDIDATE #
DEVELOP
STUDENT:Shelby Hincal
Contact sheets need to be larger to enable viewer to see you r visual thought processes
Document process of cooking head
Decay artists need to be added – Sam Taylor wood (VERITAS).
Refine cut out skull images
Document all processes
Jaw bone on the human head a full skull needs to be found and photographed
Colour flesh on face change saturation
Decay Skelton hair all parts of face need to show decay
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B
This is a working at grade at present you don’t not have a clearly defined final piece so this is
reflected in your mark