Lauren, Alex, and Nia provided feedback on the filmmakers' second screening. Lauren suggested improving the music, adding voiceover, and clarifying the storyline. Alex noted issues with audio quality and a character teleporting, and recommended better recording techniques. Nia felt some scenes were random and the music was repetitive, and disliked the production logo. The filmmakers determined they would make changes to the music, add titles and credits, consider adding voiceover, and improve audio quality based on the feedback.

1. Secondscreeningfrom3 peersandour Teacher
In the mostrecentscreeningwe hadchoose 3 peerswhowouldgive usthe mostvaluable feedback.
I will brieflydiscusswhateachpersonsaidanddiscusshow thismade ourfilmchange forthe better.
Laurensaid “ the locationshotswere goodandthere was a varietyof shotstypes”she alsogave us
some roomto improve “ change the music,considervoiceovertobuildtension,creditsandtitle and
make storyline more clear”.
Laurengave usgreat feedbackwhich willchange ourfilminapositive way. Givingideasonhow to
make our filmtenserwasgreatandis somethingthatwe wantedtodo.We alreadyknew thatwe
neededtoaddthe titlesandcreditsanda voiceoverissomethingthatwe have notdiscussedatall.
Alex
He saidroughlythe same as Laurenbut alsogave us differentimprovements.He saidthatourmale
character teleportsfromcarpark to grass. He alsogave us some tipsonhow to recordbetterand
make the audiomore clearer.
Alex gave uslessfeedbackbutimportantfeedbackthatwe mustconsider.Givingusthe tipsto
record betterwashugelyhelpful andthisissomethingthathelpedourfilmbecome better. The
otherimprovementswere hardtochange but overall Alexgave usqualityfeedbackwhich we used
to improve ourfilm
Nia
She alsogave valuable feedback.She saidthatwe shouldremove certainscenesastheyare random.
She alsosaidthat the musicwasgood as itwas dramaticbut wasabit repetitive.She didn’tlikethe
productionlogo.Otherimprovementswere the same asAlex andLauren.
FeedbackbyNiawasgreat. She basicallytoldusthatwe needto change the musicas it’srepetitive.
If its repetitive inone personsmindthanmostpeoplemaythinkthat.Furthermore she saidthatwe
shouldremove scenesastheydidn’tseemaffective.We tookthisintoconsiderationbutare
somethingthatwe didn’tagree on.
Overall the secondscreeninggave usa clearinsightonhow to make our projectbetterwithinthe
time we hadleft. The second screeningwasusedforus to see where we were andwhere we
wantedtobe.From thiswe learnedthatwe neededtomake some huge changesbutalsosome
minorimprovements. There were timesthatwe didn’tagree onwhatthe feedbacktoldushowever
we tookall intoconsideration.