The document is a script for a wedding trailer titled "Thorn Lane". It outlines 9 scenes showing the bride Eva becoming increasingly hesitant and distressed on her wedding day. Scene 1 establishes Eva near the church doors contemplating attending. Scene 2 shows the bridesmaids walking down the aisle. Scene 3 is from Eva's point of view as she looks out at the crowd upon entering. Subsequent scenes depict Eva nervously fidgeting with her ring, slowly walking down the aisle, and looking worried at the altar. Intercut are scenes of antagonists tearing up pictures of Eva with the best man Zach and flashbacks hinting at a relationship between them. The final scene shows Eva with Marcus at the altar as she continues

1.
St.
Paul’s
Catholic
College
Unit
G324:
Advanced
Portfolio
in
Media
Script
Name
of
Production:
Thorn
Lane
Group
Members
(Full
names):
Sarah
Hutton
Nathan
Cordero
Ridgeway
Mazvimavi
Charlene
Fernandes
Bride-­‐
Eva
Groom-­‐Marcus
Best
Man-­‐
Zach
Bridesmaids-­‐
Veronica
and
Anna
Key-­‐
*
-­‐
Means
area
for
potential
shots
#
-­‐
Make
note
of
/IDEA
BOLD
Italics
–
Very
important
<Look
in
to
ReelSEO
on
You
tube>
Random
shots
to
place
within
the
trailer
-­‐ Mid
shot
of
bride
getting
ready
in
front
of
mirror
-­‐ Close
up
of
makeup
+
ECU
Lipstick
-­‐ Bride
looking
guilty
with
hand
on
stomach
in
the
preparation
room.
-­‐ A
rose
on
the
-­‐ SHOT
OF
THE
BRIDE
TEXTING
ZACH
NEEDS
TO
BE
PLACED
SOMEWHERE
IN
THIS
SCRIPT.
Scene:
1
Character
name:
Bride
-­‐
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Establishing
shot
/
Static
camera
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
Piano
beginning
Action:
Eva
near
a
car
or
church
doors,
contemplating
whether
to
attend,
since
its
an
establishing
shot,
no
facial
features
will
be
seen.
Body
language
will
be
closed
off,
with
a
hesitation
at
door.

2. Scene:
2
Character
name:
Veronica
and
Anna
–
Bridesmaids
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Tracking
Mid
shot
of
aisle
(few
secs)
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
Piano
beginning
Action:
The
bridesmaids
walking
down
the
aisle
with
flowers,
side
by
side.
Scene:
3
Character
name:
N/A
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
POV
shot
of
Bride,
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“When
your
dreams
all
fail,
and
the
ones
we
hail,
are
the
worst
of
all…”
Action:
Camera
moving
forward
(through
doors
and
curtains?)
as
if
the
bride,
looking
at
all
the
crowd
in
the
church.
All
characters
looking
at
the
back
of
church
as
‘Bride’
enters.
*any
shots
of
shoes
emerging
from
curtains?
Scene:
4
Character
name:
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Wide/Long
shot
from
the
alter
to
back
of
church
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“...And
the
bloods
run
stale”
Action:
Bride
pauses
at
the
aisle,
looking
unsure
and
scared.
She
holds
a
bouquet
of
flowers.
Petals
falling?
Doors
still
open
*ECU
of
petals
on
ground?
Scene:
5
Character
name:
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Extreme
close
up
(
cut
in
)
of
ring
or
Medium
shot
of
bride
with
the
emphasis
on
ring.
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“I
wanna
hide
the
truth…”
Action:
Eva
nervously
moving
engagement
ring
on
ring
finger?
*Manicured
nails
in
focus/
or
fake
nails-­‐
to
show
how
fake
this
wedding
is.
*Lighting
changes?
Low
key
lighting
if
possible
to
show
the
concealment
of
truth
Scene:
6
Character
name:
Eva
+
crowd
+
Marcus

3. Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Long
shot
from
back
of
church
can
see
Marcus’
face
and
Eva’s
back.
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“…
I
wanna…”
Action:
Slow
walk
down
the
aisle
towards
Marcus
and
priest
at
alter
Scene:
7
Character
name:
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Frontal
shot
of
Eva-­‐
Close
up
of
Face
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“…shelter
you
…”
Action:
Face
turned
to
Left
(
then
right?
)looking
worried
and
scared.
*”But
with
the
Beast
inside”-­‐
shot
of
hand
(with
ring)
on
baby
bump
Scene:
8
Character
name:
Crowd
antagonists
(
more
girls?
)
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Camera
stationed
in
aisle
facing
left-­‐
Mid
shot
of
group
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“There’s
nowhere
we
can
hide”
Action:
The
antagonists
tearing
up
pictures
of
Eva
and
Best
man
–
Zach.
Cruel
facial
expressions-­‐
Varying
from
Distaste
to
Sympathy
to
downright
Hostility
(
*
the
one
holing
images
perhaps?)
*ECU
high
angle
looking
down
on
images
on
ground
*Cut-­‐away
to
a
flashback
of
the
antagonist
peeking
on
a
moment
between
Eva
and
Zach?
Scene:
9
Character
name:
Eva
and
Marcus
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Tracking
backwards-­‐
two
in
shot
of
Marcus
and
Eva.
Also
camera
should
capture
some
of
best
man
as
well.
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
“No
matter
what
we
breed”
Action:
Eva
comes
to
stand
next
to
Marcus
(
still
below
platform
)
Looks
at
Marcus
Scene:
9.5
Shot
type/Camera
Angle
:
OTS
shot
to
the
best
man
Scene:10
Character
name:
Zach
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Mid
to
Close
up

4. Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
”..We
still
are
made
of
greed”
Action:
Watching
the
Bride
and
Groom
with
Envy
and
resentment,
eyes
roving
up
and
down.
Jaw
clenched.
Looking
very
uncomfortable.
*Close
up
of
Bride
and
Groom
briefly
touching
hands?
Scene:
10.5
Shot
type/Camera
angle:
Mid
shot-­‐
looking
down
the
church
between
the
bride
and
grooms
faces.
#
Faces
blurred
–
either
Eva
and
Marcus
or
the
rest
of
the
church,
depending
on
what
we
are
trying
to
portray.
Scene:
11
Character
name:
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Cuts
to
a
Close
up
of
Bride
watching
the
best
man
–
another
OTS?
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
This is my kingdom come
Action:
Shaking
head
(
in
regret?
In
denial?
In
plea
that
he
doesn’t
say
anything
of
their
affair?)
As
watches
the
Best
man
near
the
Groom
Scene:
11.5
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Mid
shot
high
angle
looking
down.
Action:
Best
man
looking
away
guiltily
*2-­‐in-­‐shot
of
bride
and
Groom
-­‐Mouthing
of
the
words
“
I
do”
?
Scene:12
Character
name:
Zach
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Cuts
to
a
mid
shot
of
the
ring
being
pulled
out
of
a
pocket
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
This is my kingdom come
Action:
Ring
being
pulled
out
Scene:
13
Character
name:
N/A
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Close
up
/
Tracking
shot
of
the
ring
moving
from
the
hands
of
Zach
to
Marcus

5. Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
When you feel my heat
Action:
Ring
being
passed
on
reluctantly
from
Zack
to
Marcus
Scene:14
Character
name:
Marcus
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Mid
shot
facing
Marcus
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
Look into my eyes
Action:
Marcus
looking
down
in
concentration
and
then
staring
(
at
Eva
-­‐
viewers
cannot
fully
see)
at
his
New
wife
as
he
place
the
ring
on
her
finger.
Scene:15
Character
name:
Marcus
and
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Low
angle
close
up
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
It's where my demons hide
Action:
ring
slipping
on
and
hands
joined
Scene:
16
Character
name:
Eva
and
Marcus
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Cuts
to
a
High
angle
Mid
shot
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
It's where my demons hide
Action:
Couple
leans
in
for
kiss
(FADES
OUT)
Scene
:
17
Character
name:
N/A
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Wide
shot
or
Pan?
Establishes
the
change
of
setting
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
Don't get too close
Action:
Everyone
at
Reception,
laughing
&
drinking.
*Break
the
frame,
by
having
guests
walking
around
in
front
of
camera
(very
short)
to
show
the
upcoming
break
in
marriage.
Scene
:
18
Character
name:
Zach
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Pan
and
mid
shot
to
close?
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
It's dark inside
Action:
The
camera
stops
on
Zach
(to
his
face)
who
pulls
out
his
phone
and
checks
his
messages,
his
brow
furrows
and
his
face
registers
shock,
betrayal
and
then
anger.

6.
#
To
match
the
lyrics,
a
dark
tinge
to
the
surrounding
after
this
scene
#
Editing;
Text
message
in
air
(Like
Sherlock)or
an
OTS
shot
of
phone
Scene
:
19
Character
name:
Zach
&
others
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
From
mid
to
wide,
to
take
in
the
other
characters
around
Zach
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
Change
to
BOOSH?
Action:
Zach
pushes
aggressively
away
from
the
table,
knocking
his
chair
over
in
the
process,
drawing
gasps
from
his
neighbors,
he
then
sends
a
look
of
disgust
towards
the
bride.
Scene:
20
Character
name:
Zach
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Tracking
his
departure
(facing
from
front
or
back?)
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
Booosh
Action:
Angry
purposeful
strides
to
the
door
Scene:21
Character
name:
Marcus
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
high
angle
looking
down
Midshot
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
BOOSH
Action:
Confused
Groom
pushes
out
to
follow
but
catches
a
view
of
the
phone
and
picks
it
up.
In
the
corner
of
frame
a
panicked
bride?
*POV
(Marcus)
shot
of
the
door
and
phone,
moving
to
focus
on
phone-­‐
reflecting
his
gaze.
Scene:22
Character
name:
Eva
Shot
type/Camera
Angle:
Side
Close
up
Voiceover/Non-­‐Diegetic
Music:
BOOOSH
Action:
Panic
on
face
as
she
views
the
phone
in
her
hubbys
hands
*ECU
of
nails
digging
in
to
the
table
Scene
23:
Quick
Close
up
cut
to
Marcus’
face
(ANGRY)
to
Brides
face
(GULITY)
and
to
other
confused
faces
of
guests.
Scene
24:
Cutaway
to
dying
petal
on
ground
of
church
aisle?
FINI