1. Ryan Williams
Student
16
‘’Wow it’s awesome. Very
well put together, unique
and I wanted to see what
would happen next.
When she turned around
it reminded me of
Slender Man – very
spooky! Good job’’

2. Halima Hussain
Acting Student
17
What I enjoyed when watching this clip was how influential the music was,
how it set a story in my mind- which is effective as it keeps the viewer
engaged. I was interested to know what was going on, why she was in
danger and how she managed to end up in the woods. I liked the ending as
we then find out this character in danger-she’s safe at home, and it was all
just a bad dream. An area to improve on is the quality of the picture, as it
was very blurry and difficult to see what was going on especially as the
scene jumps from two different places in such a short space of time.

3. Jade Milsom
Mum
18
I think it was a good
film opening and I
liked how you had to
wait to realise she
was only dreaming.
The way it ended was
good because you
wanted to know what
type of characters
they would end up
being.

4. Megan – Rose Kelly
Student
17
When it comes to jumpy
beginnings and structured films
this definitely fits the title. Great
opening for a film and set the
base for a good movie overall.
Audio is consistent however
breathing effects are a little loud.
Nice camera angles and good
use of spacial dynamics .

5. Laura 23
Uni Student
Not showing the characters face
made it seem quite spooky/scary Sam 25
and the contrast of someone Builder
running and somebody sleeping
in bed was good. I liked it. It was a good film opening
for amateurs but it doesn’t
look like my type of
thriller. The only thrillers I
like are ones with males in
the cast.