Revision Worksheet In Essay 2, you will make use of self-critique, peer review, and instructor feedback to revise your first essay. A portion of your grade on this essay, as well as on Essays 3 and 4, will be based on your ability to demonstrate significant revision of your work. You must submit a description of the revision process, including the sources of feedback you used and a description of the revisions you made to address the concerns raised by your reviewers. Answer the following questions, save the document, and submit this worksheet along with Essays 2 -4. 1. Self-critique: What did you want to change/revise about the original paper? Be specific about any “re-visioning” you did. Where is this evident in the changes you made to the original? 2. Peer Review: What did the peer comments on your paper tell you? What feedback did you find useful? How did you address their concerns in your revision process? Be specific with details. 3. Instructor Feedback: Which of the instructor’s comments on the paper did you find useful in the revision process? What were the problems noted? How did you address them in your revision? 4. Summary of the Revision Process: What process did you use for revising your essay? What did you do differently from drafting your original? What sections of the essay did you revise: introduction, thesis, key points, examples given, development of points, summary, restatement of thesis, and/or conclusion? Tami Golwire-Major English 111 Professor Keitel August 31, 2015 Junot Diaz wrote this magnificent piece and dedicated it to her mother Azua “The Dreamer”. Her strength was so very impressive, trying to attain her education while growing up in such horrible conditions while living within the Dominican Republic, which was fuel for his very own successful life that he also wanted to obtain. What’s most appealing about “The Dreamer” is that the author recognizes the strength and determination his mother has to be able to dream at the sake of her own health and wellbeing to see fulfillment of those dreams. Diaz gave his mother praise for his life accomplishments. Having someone positive in your life such as a mentor or even a person who has lived his or her right by all standards that one can look up too can have a larger impact on that person life in such a way that they are thankful for and can be a life lesson passed on to the next person making all things that seem that aren’t possible, possible. Mother’s molding their children into respectful and productive adults, allowing them to give back to society and to become the success story that they image one to be. The summary of “The Dreamer” written by Junot Diaz will relate to other positive outcomes and the positive effects of other outstanding role models followed with a conclusion. Azua grew up in horrible and impoverished conditions in Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic. Her mother expected to work on their family farm or ...