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Response to feedback
After looking at some responses from viewers on my feedback form and in class,
I’m pleased with the positive reaction towards the short film.
Here is some of the
feedback received
on the film.
After receiving some feedback on the short film, I found that some shots were unnecessary and
too long. After realising this, I decided to cut or shorten some of the clips to cut down the final
running time and make the film more short and punchy.
Overall, I am happy with the outcome of the film and the positive responses.

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Response

  • 1. Response to feedback After looking at some responses from viewers on my feedback form and in class, I’m pleased with the positive reaction towards the short film.
  • 2. Here is some of the feedback received on the film.
  • 3.
  • 4. After receiving some feedback on the short film, I found that some shots were unnecessary and too long. After realising this, I decided to cut or shorten some of the clips to cut down the final running time and make the film more short and punchy. Overall, I am happy with the outcome of the film and the positive responses.