The document provides feedback on three film scenes: a shot reverse shot scene showing two characters talking was well edited but could have benefited from another angle; a match on action scene of a character walking through a door and down stairs had editing that worked well with the soundtrack but slightly unstable camerawork; and feedback that a shot transition from the first to second scene was done well by keeping the characters on their own sides to show continuity while changing the viewing angle to focus on the action.

1. Joe Martyn

2.  This is our shot reverse
shot scene showing
two characters talking.
 Overall the continuity
and editing was good.
 However the scene
could have benefitted
from using another
angle such as an over
the shoulder shot.

3.  This match on action
scene shows one
character walking
through a door then
going down some
stairs.
 The editing works well
with the soundtrack,
but the camerawork is
slightly unstable.

4.  From the first shot to the second, we keep the
characters on their own sides in order to show
continuity. This shot was done well as it
shows that the viewpoint is the same but
shows a slightly different angle to focus on
the action.