A student named Janan Kolcak proposes ideas for an original horror film titled "Nightmare on Bury Campus." The plot involves a haunted school with a killer teacher and a crazy girl named Mary who died at the school and now kills people. The main characters would be Mary, the heroine Chloe who saves the school, and Chloe's sister Janan. In the opening, the new student Sarah would be led to the science lab by Mary and killed. Peer feedback on the initial idea was positive, praising the level of detail, though noting it could use more problems outlined.