The document provides feedback from a test screening of a film opening sequence. In three sentences: The feedback indicates that while the opening sequence conveyed tension well, it needs titles added to make it clear it is an opening sequence. Most elements like mise-en-scene, camera work, editing, and sound were rated good or excellent, with the main strengths being angles used and editing. Suggestions for improvement included finishing and adding titles, and using sound more effectively.

1. AS MEDIA STUDIES
Opening Sequence Test Screening:
Rough Cut Edit Audience Feedback
Once you have watched the opening sequence, please answer the following
questions. Please be honest but also as objective and as constructive as
possible. Remember the feedback you give will be used directly in the
filmmakers’ blogs.
Group No.
023
Is it clear that it is an opening sequence and the opening sequence conventions
are met?
No, their titles need to be added, but good tension
In your view how effective were the following?
Excellent Good OK Poor Very Poor
Mis en Scene
Camera Work
Editing
Sound
What in your view are the sequences main strengths?
The angles they used as well as the editing, especially the CCTV view, their
camera work was top notch and we liked the 4 angle shot.
How do you think the sequence can be improved?
Titles would need to be finished and included into your sequence. Sound
being used could be more effective depending on if you use it correctly.