1. Do you think anything could be improved,whatdidnt you like about
it?
Acting could be better but otherwise no comments
The sound - block out background noise One shot was out of focus The acting
Would only watch this because the filming was well done, that is all
the unnecessary eccentric and rich bitchiness to it….
the unnecessary eccentric and rich bitchiness to it….
I feel as the script was acted to robotically
The lighting could be improved.
I think it was great and idont think much could be improved however , more expensive equipment ,more hd
cameras etc of course will always improve movies but it really isntnessassary.
^point about angles. quickerget away car. maybe some more intensity when the penny drops about the bomb.
Camera work was great but enhancing the actual video quality (it wasn't high definition) would make it even
better.
The acting and the fact the sound production is not very good
The acting
Small issue with sound. Could be worked on.
Accoustics, a little to harsh
without knowing more about the storyline and characters it has a lot of similarities with recent kidnap films, which
would put people off
Less obvious
The acting of the Dad. The reaction of Sofia.
I guess to make it really professional, you should work on little details like the sound of the shoes when they walk
etc
the script at time is a bit obvious and things like when the nanny is in the car texting, it doesnt make sense that
she does it right in front of the girl's face
I thought the opening scene , the little girls acting and all of it was good but the script was a tiny bit cheesy,a few
things they said were a bit cringey!
I think that the only thing i would improve would be the speed of the texting as im a slow reader yet it also goes
well with the pace of the film so many people may think this is a positive thing.Well done guys,very hard to
critisise as loved it!
Perhaps the acting could be better but otherwise itsgreat,odd shot out of focus but nothing to worry about at all!
The man acting
Acting wasn't great... Just the storyline really...
In my opinion, there were times when the acting was a little too far-fetched.
I wouldnt say there was anything i disliked, perhaps the slight out-of-focusness at one point
no was great!
I thought some of the sound I.e steps on the wooden floor, ambient noise etc could have been softer
loved it but one shot i thought could be improved ,when the nanny is leaving the fathers office with sophia to take
her to the safe house she struggles to open the door but others could argue this creates more tension.Its hard to
critisise and im impressed!
just the angle the woman in the car who is hugging the girl holds her phone at. the girl could easily look at what
the woman is texting and uncover the plan. perhaps she should hold her phone behind the girl so that she will not
have any chance of reading the screen.
Less pausing between dialogue when camera pans to new character.
No
nothing
I liked it all - the acting was also very realistic. I liked the music, sound and shots! The location was also very
suitably chosen! It kind of reminds me of Taken - which is a very good thing as it's my favourite film!

2. I think it was amazing but the only thing that could be improved was at the begining of the clip the line "i want to
go outside and me a normal girl like all my friends" this is quite cheesy.It is not a major issue though!