Kamal Ali created several drafts for a new music magazine and presented them for feedback. Attendees were given a questionnaire to evaluate each draft page and suggest improvements. Ali thanked attendees for their participation and invited any questions before concluding the presentation.

1. My fist Drafts
By Kamar Ali

2. Introduction
• Hello and welcome to this presentation
• When you walked in you should have been
handed a questionnaire to fill in
• I am going to show you the drafts I have made
for my music based magazine and please can you
fill out the questionnaire on how you feel about
each draft and what changes you would make to
improve these drafts.

3. Front cover draft:

4. Contents page draft:

5. Double page spread drafts:

6. • Thank you for coming to this presentation and
filling in the questionnaire, and will you please
leave your questionnaire on the desk when you
leave. If you would like to ask a question or if
you would like to recommend anything please
ask now.