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Audience Feedback
  Media Studies
  Brontë Vickery
Feedback sheet 1:
Mise-en-scene:
Good use of credits written on box and envelope.
Camera: over the shoulder shots
Sound:fitting music
Feedback sheet 2:
Mise-en-scene:
Girl’s bedroom, moving house.
Some credits written on objects-effective.
Camera: over the shoulder shots, good close ups and
range of angles.
Sound:
music fitted the story and lyrics matches with each
scene.
Editing: good effects, quick cuts between girl packing
box and “ryan” calling her.
Feedback sheet 3:
Sound: good music.

Editing: Love where you put the credits, and the scene of
filling up the boxes with different things.
Feedback sheet 4:
Mise-en-scene:
Good use of props and costume, sets the scene.
Camera: could have added more angles but overall good.
Sound:
music emotional music fits well.
Editing: good use of cut scenes eg. Box filling up.
Feedback sheet 5:
Sound: no digetic sound used.

Editing: good use of credits eg writing on the
box/envelope etc.
Feedback sheet 6:
Camera: I really liked the shots of the objects going into
the box.

Sound: good choice of sound, song fitted well.
Editing: credits edited really well.
Feedback sheet 7:
Mise-en-scene:
Good use of props, appropriate age of girl.
Camera: good shots.
Sound: good music.
Editing: good order of scenes, good cutting scenes eg.
Box filling up.
Feedback sheet 8:
Camera: good variety of shots but some shots a bit too
long.
Sound:
music suited the film but sounded bit odd in the middle.
Editing: continuity was good but some bits seemed a little
jumpy.
Feedback sheet 9:
Mise-en-scene:
Posters good.
Camera: flashes to phone and stop motion with packing box
really good.
Sound:
Song lyrics fit the scenario, but some more diegetic
sounds would have been nicer.
Editing: really smooth, although the match on action
going out of the door could have been a tiny bit smoother.
Feedback sheet 10:
Mise-en-scene:
Good scenery, location was good and made it into a “girly”
room.
Camera: variety of shots was good!.
Sound:nice music and diegetic sound.
Editing: “filling up the box” editing was really good.
Feedback sheet 11:
Mise-en-scene:
Love the posters, “zayn styles” good name for production
manager.
Camera: good variety of shots.
Sound:
Good song.
Editing: good appropriate pace.
Feedback sheet 12:
Mise-en-scene:
Bare walls added to the sense of “leaving behind”.
Camera: no shaky shots, good framing.
Sound:
music fitted really well with the story.
Editing: nice box-filling shot.
Feedback sheet 13:
Mise-en-scene:
Effective use of on-screen text credits.
Camera: good lighting quality.
Sound:
Atmospheric sound track.
Editing: stop-start- animation
Feedback sheet 14:
Mise-en-scene:
The bare walls made it seem more like she had a lot to
leave behind.
Camera: really good variety of shots especially when she
came down the stairs.
Sound:The music really matched the genre and what was
going on- made it more emotional, gave a bigger impact on
the audience.
Editing: I liked the way the box gradually filled up.
Feedback sheet 15:
Mise-en-scene:
Good props.
Camera: nice choice of shots for genre. Good over-the
shoulder shot.
Sound:Good choice of music, music builds up at correct
time.
Editing: sound loop on menu, nice stop-start animations.

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Media audience feedback

  • 1. Audience Feedback Media Studies Brontë Vickery
  • 2. Feedback sheet 1: Mise-en-scene: Good use of credits written on box and envelope. Camera: over the shoulder shots Sound:fitting music
  • 3. Feedback sheet 2: Mise-en-scene: Girl’s bedroom, moving house. Some credits written on objects-effective. Camera: over the shoulder shots, good close ups and range of angles. Sound: music fitted the story and lyrics matches with each scene. Editing: good effects, quick cuts between girl packing box and “ryan” calling her.
  • 4. Feedback sheet 3: Sound: good music. Editing: Love where you put the credits, and the scene of filling up the boxes with different things.
  • 5. Feedback sheet 4: Mise-en-scene: Good use of props and costume, sets the scene. Camera: could have added more angles but overall good. Sound: music emotional music fits well. Editing: good use of cut scenes eg. Box filling up.
  • 6. Feedback sheet 5: Sound: no digetic sound used. Editing: good use of credits eg writing on the box/envelope etc.
  • 7. Feedback sheet 6: Camera: I really liked the shots of the objects going into the box. Sound: good choice of sound, song fitted well. Editing: credits edited really well.
  • 8. Feedback sheet 7: Mise-en-scene: Good use of props, appropriate age of girl. Camera: good shots. Sound: good music. Editing: good order of scenes, good cutting scenes eg. Box filling up.
  • 9. Feedback sheet 8: Camera: good variety of shots but some shots a bit too long. Sound: music suited the film but sounded bit odd in the middle. Editing: continuity was good but some bits seemed a little jumpy.
  • 10. Feedback sheet 9: Mise-en-scene: Posters good. Camera: flashes to phone and stop motion with packing box really good. Sound: Song lyrics fit the scenario, but some more diegetic sounds would have been nicer. Editing: really smooth, although the match on action going out of the door could have been a tiny bit smoother.
  • 11. Feedback sheet 10: Mise-en-scene: Good scenery, location was good and made it into a “girly” room. Camera: variety of shots was good!. Sound:nice music and diegetic sound. Editing: “filling up the box” editing was really good.
  • 12. Feedback sheet 11: Mise-en-scene: Love the posters, “zayn styles” good name for production manager. Camera: good variety of shots. Sound: Good song. Editing: good appropriate pace.
  • 13. Feedback sheet 12: Mise-en-scene: Bare walls added to the sense of “leaving behind”. Camera: no shaky shots, good framing. Sound: music fitted really well with the story. Editing: nice box-filling shot.
  • 14. Feedback sheet 13: Mise-en-scene: Effective use of on-screen text credits. Camera: good lighting quality. Sound: Atmospheric sound track. Editing: stop-start- animation
  • 15. Feedback sheet 14: Mise-en-scene: The bare walls made it seem more like she had a lot to leave behind. Camera: really good variety of shots especially when she came down the stairs. Sound:The music really matched the genre and what was going on- made it more emotional, gave a bigger impact on the audience. Editing: I liked the way the box gradually filled up.
  • 16. Feedback sheet 15: Mise-en-scene: Good props. Camera: nice choice of shots for genre. Good over-the shoulder shot. Sound:Good choice of music, music builds up at correct time. Editing: sound loop on menu, nice stop-start animations.