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Lyddie: Lesson seventeen, Unit 1
This document provides instructions for students to critique each other's work on quotes from the novel Lyddie using a "quote sandwich" format. Students are told to exchange their quote sandwiches with a partner and provide feedback based on criteria such as whether the introduction and analysis of the quote make sense. Students will then revise their own work based on the feedback before writing an essay, using quotes sandwiches to support their arguments. The learning objectives are to critique a partner's use of evidence, revise one's own work with feedback, and write an organized argument essay about the novel Lyddie.
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Lyddie: Lesson seventeen, Unit 1
- 1. DO NOW Entry Task– Critique YOUR work • Take out your planning page from yesterday • Use it to create a quote sandwich for your Entry Task Quiz!!
- 2. Introduce the quote Inchapter _______, ___________ On page __________ it says, “_____________________________________ ___________________________________” Analyze the quote This shows that _____________
- 3. Lyddie Learning Objectives I cancritique my partner’s use of evidence using criteria from the Lyddie argument rubric. I can revise my work by incorporating helpful feedback from my partner. I can write an organized argument essay about Lyddie.
- 4. Lyddie Writing Argument Peer Critique •What is it? • When did we do it before? • Anyone remember rules for critiquing a classmate’s work?
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- 6. Lyddie Writing Argument Peer Critique •Pick a friend you trust • Exchange your Entry Tasks…quote sandwiches! • Use your worksheets to track what your partner says TO YOU
- 7. Lyddie Writing Argument Peer Critique •As you read, think: 1. Does the introduction of the quote give enough background information to understand it? 2. Did he/she punctuate & cite the quote? 3. Does the explanation of the quote make sense?
- 8. Lyddie Writing Argument Peer Critique= REVISE! • Write out your partner’s critique • Then…time to revise your quote sandwich! • Rewrite it incorporating your partner’s suggestion(s)
- 9. Lyddie Writing Argument WRITING THEESSAY!?! • Use the ideas & evidence in the planners • Be sure to quote sandwich EVERY quote! • Will have today & tomorrow to finish • I will comment/ correct and return to you
- 10. Lyddie Learning Objectives I cancritique my partner’s use of evidence using criteria from the Lyddie argument rubric. I can revise my work by incorporating helpful feedback from my partner. I can write an organized argument essay about Lyddie.
- 11. Lyddie Homework Homework • Chapters 20-23due in TWO DAYS!! • Read & fill in Reader’s Notes…