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2. Thesis
Corruption is one of major problems in our country. Although we may
not hear about corruption case every day in television, but I
personally think that it is actually the root of almost every problem in
Indonesia.

3. Argument I
Firstly, corruption can harm an individual, group, or a country,
especially in the economic field.
Argument II
Secondly, why does corruption harm the Indonesian economy?
Because corruption takes a lot of money, even though the money
is from the people and foreign exchange is used to build the
country and prosper the people, instead it is used for one-sided
interests. In this way, corruption can destroy Indonesia. Therefore,
corruption is very detrimental to Indonesia.

4. Argument III
Thirdly, corruption actually threatens our justice system. The
existence of corrupt individuals within our society opens up a
chance for anyone who has money to do almost anything that
they want. It includes bribing our justice system. This condition
undermines the justice system in our country until one day there is
no more justice in our country. We can only imagine how many
criminals will be able to walk free from their trials just because
they have the ability to control the justice system one day.
Argument IV
However, in reality the law for corruptors in Indonesia is very light,
and some even have their terms of imprisonment cut. Should be
sentenced to death or the severest, so that justice is done. As the
saying goes, sharp down, blunt up.

5. Conclusion
There must be justice in the form of laws that incriminate
the corruptors to be more deterrent and no one else
dares to commit acts of corruption, because this act of
corruption is very influential with the slowing down of a
country's economic growth, increasing poverty, and can
reduce the level of happiness of the people in a
country.That is the reason why I believe that corruption is
the root of many problems in our country.