The document outlines a scene plan for a thriller story set in a library. It begins by establishing students studying and chatting in the library. The librarian is seen sneering at the students. Text captions then hint that "somebody's got their knickers in a twist." An animated image shows this. The lights then flicker and go out as screams arise. Jump cuts then show the aftermath, first with the librarian holding a knife at the desk, then with all the students gone but blood everywhere. The final caption suggests the librarian "took the twist out of their knickers."

1. Idea 1
Shorai

2. Theme
• Thriller/ entertainment
• Caption: Regular Wednesday
• Establishing: Plan of library students sitting down studying/ some
chatting in group.
• Shot-reverse-shot: Liberian to students sneering
• Extreme Close-up: initially; caption ‘and somebody's got’; glance at
the woman; caption ‘their knickers in a twist’; caption ‘for the last
time’
• Image- animated version of somebody with their knickers in a twist

3. • Lightening- artificial, dimmed a bit
- Flickers after last caption
- Then blacks out – screams arise
• Sound- Non-diegetic sound of chattering
- Also diegetic – exaggerated sound of people chewing
- Writing on paper
- Chattering
- Heavy footsteps entering library

4. • Editing – Jump shot to show what happens after black out.
- Then again to librarian on desk with a butcher or regular
knife in hand
- Then black out again, students gone but lots of blood
everywhere
• Last Caption – ‘I guess that took the twist out of their knickers.’