I would like it to be an editing essay I mean to edite tha last essay which I will attach it and I need it to be closed form and follow the these stepes: 1-Intro 2-summary 3-thesis 4-body 5-conclusion if their is anything you didn't undestande it just let me know . their is some notes from my teacher that he need me to do it on the essay so please just do the notes for me .