Emily and her dead grandma
                        By Honor
Alone one dark winter’s night, Emily was sleeping cosy under
her bed covers, when she heard a banging on the door. She
got out of bed and shivered to the door. Emily opened the
door and stepped onto the front porch, looking around. But
nothing was there…


Emily strolled around her little cottage to see if anything was
there. She got back to her old ragged door and she was
certain nothing was there. Suddenly she heard a noise. She
thought it was a ghost but she knew ghosts didn’t exist.


BANG!!! The door slammed behind her. Emily turned around
and started thumping on the door. “Let me in, let me in!” but
it was no good. Finally she had an idea. She went around her
house and looked through the window, but the curtains were
shut. Then she heard the same noise that she had already
heard. Now she was positive it was a ghost.


She sat down on the dirty porch. When dawn was just
breaking the door slowly creaked open. She cheered, “YES!”
She walked in and suddenly, she saw her dead great
grandma. What was she doing there? As quiet as a mouse
she said, “hello.” But her great grandma just stared at her.


Emily sat down while her grandma was still staring. Emily
said, “Please leave.” Her grandma exclaimed in a ghostly
voice, “NO.” Emily felt uncomfortable. Her grandma said,
“come with me!” Emily shouted, “NO!”



                         THE END

Honor's suspense story

  • 1.
    Emily and herdead grandma By Honor Alone one dark winter’s night, Emily was sleeping cosy under her bed covers, when she heard a banging on the door. She got out of bed and shivered to the door. Emily opened the door and stepped onto the front porch, looking around. But nothing was there… Emily strolled around her little cottage to see if anything was there. She got back to her old ragged door and she was certain nothing was there. Suddenly she heard a noise. She thought it was a ghost but she knew ghosts didn’t exist. BANG!!! The door slammed behind her. Emily turned around and started thumping on the door. “Let me in, let me in!” but it was no good. Finally she had an idea. She went around her house and looked through the window, but the curtains were shut. Then she heard the same noise that she had already heard. Now she was positive it was a ghost. She sat down on the dirty porch. When dawn was just breaking the door slowly creaked open. She cheered, “YES!” She walked in and suddenly, she saw her dead great
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    grandma. What wasshe doing there? As quiet as a mouse she said, “hello.” But her great grandma just stared at her. Emily sat down while her grandma was still staring. Emily said, “Please leave.” Her grandma exclaimed in a ghostly voice, “NO.” Emily felt uncomfortable. Her grandma said, “come with me!” Emily shouted, “NO!” THE END