Something we could have improved on is the
time management, although my group finished
our documentary before all other groups, I still
believe we could have finished it quicker. We
particularly wasted time deciding what area of
the chess pieces we should focus on and also
our editing, we were fickle when it came to
deciding whether we should keep some
footage or not, but at the end we did get
there. Also we did have to film some last
minute footage which means we could have
maybe planned a little more effectively.
This was completely
unnecessary, by removing
this sentence, the
paragraph sounds a lot
better and more concise
because I waffled with
this.

Fixing mistakes project review part 2

  • 1.
    Something we couldhave improved on is the time management, although my group finished our documentary before all other groups, I still believe we could have finished it quicker. We particularly wasted time deciding what area of the chess pieces we should focus on and also our editing, we were fickle when it came to deciding whether we should keep some footage or not, but at the end we did get there. Also we did have to film some last minute footage which means we could have maybe planned a little more effectively. This was completely unnecessary, by removing this sentence, the paragraph sounds a lot better and more concise because I waffled with this.