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FADE IN
INT. TOBY’s HOUSE – DAY
In Windsora housesnearthe local pub.
Goesin to a room andlooksat a table withanumberof touristobjects.Thenchangestoan image of
twofriendsona wall.
FADE IN
JACKSON,A 17 yearoldteenagerhowlookstobe a touristto the UK incasual relaxingcloths.
Goesto an overshot of the roomlookingatJacksonon hislaptop.Whichthengoesto hiscomputer
USER, an unknownpersonwhoknowsJacksonsomehow.UsermessagesJacksonaskingif itishim
on face book.
USER
*Jackson*
JACKSON
*yes?Who are you?*
USER
*doesn’tmatter,thisisyourfault*
JACKSON
*What do you mean,i don’tunderstand?*
USER
*You made thishappen*
Jacksonbecomesfrustratedsodecidestoleave hisroomanddohishousework.He goesinto the
kitchenandgrabs the trash and goesoutside ashe doesthisa knife ona cuttingboard ittaken.
EXT. TOBY’S GARDEN – DAY
Jacksonputsthe trash bythe bin andon hisway back he seesa shoe soruns overto investigateas
he is analysingthe shoe he getsamessage andlooksat it itis of himin the gardenso he runs back to
hisroom
INT.TOBY’S HOUSE – DAY
Once in hisroomhe closesthe doorand hislaptopstartsmakinga call soundso he goesto itand
opensit.He doesnotknowwhatto do but acceptsthe call.
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EXT. TOBY’S GARDEN – DAY
Jacksonseeshisbestfriendall bloodyandwithaknife tohisneckand thenthe call blacksout
INT.TOBY’s HOUSE – DAY
Jacksonquicklygetsupand runsthroughthe house toget to the garden.
EXT. TOBY’S GARDEN – DAY
You see the bodyof his friendonthe floorashe comesroundthe corner and runsto it.While it
showsdifferentshotsof the bodytoshow keyparts like the missingshoe andhisglassesplusthis
neckthat has beencut.Jacksonget onthe floorandtries to wake him.Youthensee the killerwalk
downthe path and he drags hisknife alongthe woodandwhenhisbehindJackson.Jacksonturns
and see him,thenitcuts to black
FADE TO TITLE

Final script

  • 1.
    1 FADE IN INT. TOBY’sHOUSE – DAY In Windsora housesnearthe local pub. Goesin to a room andlooksat a table withanumberof touristobjects.Thenchangestoan image of twofriendsona wall. FADE IN JACKSON,A 17 yearoldteenagerhowlookstobe a touristto the UK incasual relaxingcloths. Goesto an overshot of the roomlookingatJacksonon hislaptop.Whichthengoesto hiscomputer USER, an unknownpersonwhoknowsJacksonsomehow.UsermessagesJacksonaskingif itishim on face book. USER *Jackson* JACKSON *yes?Who are you?* USER *doesn’tmatter,thisisyourfault* JACKSON *What do you mean,i don’tunderstand?* USER *You made thishappen* Jacksonbecomesfrustratedsodecidestoleave hisroomanddohishousework.He goesinto the kitchenandgrabs the trash and goesoutside ashe doesthisa knife ona cuttingboard ittaken. EXT. TOBY’S GARDEN – DAY Jacksonputsthe trash bythe bin andon hisway back he seesa shoe soruns overto investigateas he is analysingthe shoe he getsamessage andlooksat it itis of himin the gardenso he runs back to hisroom INT.TOBY’S HOUSE – DAY Once in hisroomhe closesthe doorand hislaptopstartsmakinga call soundso he goesto itand opensit.He doesnotknowwhatto do but acceptsthe call.
  • 2.
    2 EXT. TOBY’S GARDEN– DAY Jacksonseeshisbestfriendall bloodyandwithaknife tohisneckand thenthe call blacksout INT.TOBY’s HOUSE – DAY Jacksonquicklygetsupand runsthroughthe house toget to the garden. EXT. TOBY’S GARDEN – DAY You see the bodyof his friendonthe floorashe comesroundthe corner and runsto it.While it showsdifferentshotsof the bodytoshow keyparts like the missingshoe andhisglassesplusthis neckthat has beencut.Jacksonget onthe floorandtries to wake him.Youthensee the killerwalk downthe path and he drags hisknife alongthe woodandwhenhisbehindJackson.Jacksonturns and see him,thenitcuts to black FADE TO TITLE