The feedback agreed that the target audience details could have included more information like gender and social class. While the storyline and planning were well done, the mood boards would have benefited from more specific details about color schemes, fonts, and what was being created. The feedback recipient agrees with most of the feedback, such as making the mood boards more focused, including more audience details, and exploring color schemes and fonts. However, they do not agree that including lots of details in the proposal was a weakness, believing the details helped with idea generation.