The feedback provided evaluates a music video against common conventions of the genre. It finds that the video looks professional and tells a clear storyline about a relationship with good editing, cinematography, sound, and performer. Minor improvements could be made to some unclear parts but overall it is rated positively and considered entertaining.

1. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
Yes
I think I would as the song is quite good
I would imagine her as the performer as she looks and
sounds professional
I think the storyline is of a love hate relationship in which the girl is getting fed up of her
boyfriend but wants to stay with him
The clothes suit the location well, however I would have more of the forest and countryside
Yes, it is cleverly constructed

2. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
The editing suited and helped explain what the song was about

3. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
The music video is professional looking and in time
Yes, because it looks like a real music video
Yes, as it is interesting
She suits the song and is talented
Yes, because she looks like a generic love song singer
They had a good relationship but then they grew apart
Yes, she is wearing suitable clothing and looks good
Yes it sounds professional

4. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
Yes, the editing is well done
There are many different camera angles

5. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
Be about the song – have the song and be the length of the song
Yes
No, as it isn’t a song I would listen to
She has the representation of a teenage girl who has a boyfriend but doesn’t want to be with
him anymore
Yes, she sang well and was in sync and can also play the
ukulele. I’d rate it a: 1 2 3 4 5
The girl doesn’t love her boyfriend anymore because he did something to her?
Yes and yes
Yes and yes. I would rate it a: 1 2 3 4 5

6. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
Yes – but some parts weren’t clear. Has she broken up with her boyfriend?
Yes, it looks like other music videos I’ve seen
Was the song written before or after she broke up with her boyfriend? They look like flashbacks
but personally I found it difficult to follow on terms of when it was written

7. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
Yes
Maybe, it’s a sweet story
She looks like she would play the ukulele well and I can imagine her performing it.
Yes, she looks the part and fits the narrative of the song / video.
She’s in a relationship with a guy she loves, however, she doesn’t want to be too smothered and
is confused with her feelings?
I like the woods / field location. Appropriate locations like the swings and the house. Her clothes
are sweet which reflect the song and herself
She has a good voice and fits with the narrative. The ukulele is a little iffy but mainly good

8. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
Yes – the editing is fine
Yes

9. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
Yes
No
She looks like a potential rock star type of girl
Yes
The girl thinks she is not up to standard for the boy
Yes and yes
Yes and yes

10. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
Yes
Yes it does
Video colouring quality

11. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
Locations, quiet, rural, reflecting music
Yes
Yes
Fitting to the music video
Yes – she looks confident while singing
Reflecting her feelings on her relationship
Yes and yes
Yes

12. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
Yes, looks amateur but it fits
Yes

13. Feedback Sheet
What do you think are the conventions of a music video?
Does it look like a music video? Does it meet the criteria?
Would you want to watch it again?
What are your representations of the singer? How would you describe her?
Does she look like a performer?
What do you think is the storyline behind the song?
Mise en Scene – do you think it is set in the right location? Is she wearing the right clothes?
Sound – does it sound like a professional song? Does she sing it conventionally?
Video that goes well with the music and entertaining
Yes, it’s entertaining
Yes, I enjoyed the narrative
Cute and girly
Yes – quite indie ish / katenashy
The girl thought she needed the boy to be happy but she doesn’t?
Yes and yes – I like her dresses
Yes and yes

14. Editing – Does it look like it’s edited professionally? Improvements?
Cinematography – does it match to the criteria of a music video?
Other comments
Yes – especially the editing on the flashbacks
Yes
I think it’s really good!