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A mini-lesson for improving constructed
responses
Question: How does Diane Nash show bravery?
Student Answer: Based on the text, Ms. Nash is and
can be considered brave. “If the path was through
the jailhouse, I would do that.” This quote explains
how Diane Nash was brave by saying she would go
to jail for equality.
The Reader Asks: How does going to jail exhibit
bravery?
What else is
it missing?
Question: Use text evidence to explain a sacrifice
Diane Nash made during the Civil Rights
Movement.
Answer: One of the sacrifices that Diane Nash did
was going to jail. “…1962 I was arrested and
sentenced to two years in prison for teaching non-
violence to children in Jackson.” She went to jail
while she was pregnant because teaching those
kids nonviolence was very important to her.
The Reader Asks: How is going to jail a sacrifice?
What else is
it missing?
Synonym:
“cost”
 Diane Nash did not spend two years (or her
entire life) in jail. She spent ___________.
 Diane Nash did not deliver her baby in jail.
 Diane Nash did not go to war. She said that
Jackson was “like a war zone.” How is this
different?
 “I determined the speaker’s tone by the way
he put his words together.”
 Is this an 8th grade level response?
 “The speaker’s tone is reflective because it
mentions most of the heroes who stood up
for injustice.”
 Is this an 8th grade level response?
Everyone else wrote: “Diane Nash went to jail while
she was four months pregnant.”
You wrote: “Even though she was four months
pregnant, Diane Nash willingly sacrificed her time,
her safety, and possibly even her health by spending
30 days in jail.”
Which is more impressive? Which catches your eye
the most?
 From a 3 to a 4
 From barely a 4 to a
solid 4

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Expanding R.A.C.E.

  • 1. A mini-lesson for improving constructed responses
  • 2. Question: How does Diane Nash show bravery? Student Answer: Based on the text, Ms. Nash is and can be considered brave. “If the path was through the jailhouse, I would do that.” This quote explains how Diane Nash was brave by saying she would go to jail for equality. The Reader Asks: How does going to jail exhibit bravery? What else is it missing?
  • 3. Question: Use text evidence to explain a sacrifice Diane Nash made during the Civil Rights Movement. Answer: One of the sacrifices that Diane Nash did was going to jail. “…1962 I was arrested and sentenced to two years in prison for teaching non- violence to children in Jackson.” She went to jail while she was pregnant because teaching those kids nonviolence was very important to her. The Reader Asks: How is going to jail a sacrifice? What else is it missing? Synonym: “cost”
  • 4.  Diane Nash did not spend two years (or her entire life) in jail. She spent ___________.  Diane Nash did not deliver her baby in jail.  Diane Nash did not go to war. She said that Jackson was “like a war zone.” How is this different?
  • 5.  “I determined the speaker’s tone by the way he put his words together.”  Is this an 8th grade level response?  “The speaker’s tone is reflective because it mentions most of the heroes who stood up for injustice.”  Is this an 8th grade level response?
  • 6. Everyone else wrote: “Diane Nash went to jail while she was four months pregnant.” You wrote: “Even though she was four months pregnant, Diane Nash willingly sacrificed her time, her safety, and possibly even her health by spending 30 days in jail.” Which is more impressive? Which catches your eye the most?
  • 7.  From a 3 to a 4  From barely a 4 to a solid 4