Amelia O'Callaghan received feedback on her music video from classmates and teachers. The feedback highlighted things that worked well, such as her use of green screen and performance scenes, and areas for improvement like adding more variety of shots and improving lighting. She used the feedback to re-film parts to improve the narrative and add more shot variety. Additional feedback noted too many mid shots, so she re-filmed with more close ups and long shots. Overall, the feedback helped Amelia identify issues like lighting, hands disappearing on green screen, and lack of narrative, which she addressed to strengthen the music video.

1. What have you learnt
from you audience
feedback?
In this PowerPoint you will clearly see
how I efficiently used comments and
feedback from classmates and teachers
in order to improve my music video.
Amelia O’Callaghan

2. Good:
• Green Screen use is
good
• Performance scenes
look confident
• Well synced to
music
Improve:
• Needs more shot
type variety
• Hands disappear on
green screen shots
• More narrative - to
make sense of what is
happening
From this feedback we planned to correct
many things and to also keep others. We re-
filmed lots of the narrative in order for the
story to make sense.
We also included more variety when it came
to shot types:
Amelia O’Callaghan

3. Good:
• Fast
Paced
Editing
• Scenes
cut to the
beat
Improve:
•Lighting
• Narrative becomes
repetitive
• Too many mid shots
• Too much green
screen shots
From this feedback we realised we had
too many mid shots. Therefore we re-
filmed some close ups and long shots. By
filming in front of the black screen we
also managed to reduce the amount of
green screen we had.
Amelia O’Callaghan

4. Good:
• Green Screen
use is good
(matches
genre)
• Effective
performance
shots
• Good editing
Improve:
• Lighting
• Some green scene
shots
• Edit odd bits that
are out of sync
• More narrative
needed for sense of
‘flow’
• More variety of
shots needed
The constructive critisism from this person
was helpful as it reinforced the fact the
narrative had to be refilmed which we did do.
Within my section of the music video I also
made sure there were no bits out of sync!
Amelia O’Callaghan

5. Good:
• Cheesy
• Fits genre
•Edited well
• Good use of green
screen
Improve:
• Lighting
• Hands disappear
in green screen
• More narrative is
needed
I was concerned with the fact the
hands disappeared within the music
video as it looked unprofessional.
Although the majority of those
sections were removed I did manage
to edit the eight-pint garbage setting
and make sure the hands stayed in
shot in certain sections.
Amelia O’Callaghan

6. Good:
• Seemed like
a girl-band
• Good
costumes
• Fit the
genre
Improve:
•Storyline
•Narrative
•Some green
screens don’t look
good
•Shadows/Lighting
The lighting issue seemed to come up
in lots of people’s improve points.
Therefore within my music video
sections I went through carefully and
made sure all the lighting improved
and the shadows reduced. Especially
on the green screen effect shots. I feel
it made a massive improvement to
the overall music video.
Amelia O’Callaghan

7. Overall I feel all the feedback I received, from
viewers of our music video, was taken into
account and was used efficiently to improve
the music video. The positive points helped me
to further understand what was particularly
like by the audience such as the good framing
and the costumes. The improvement
comments helped me to think of ways to
correct my music video to make it what the
target audience enjoyed.
Amelia O’Callaghan