ERROR ANALYSIS 3R ESO                       NOVEMBER 2012

Find the mistakes and try to improve the following sentences:

   1.   And this storys never finish fine, all people death...
   2.   ...but their friends were died...
   3.   I don’t like these book because I don’t like the histories
        about assassins.
   4.   The most frightnening film I have ever saw...
   5.   ...because it dies very people.
   6.   It is very fright because a girl was segrested and she could
        scape...
   7.   the most important thing in this book is that make you
        think in almost everithing, live, dead, terror, madnnes...
   8.   he kill the cat and her wife because he pretend kill his
        cat...
   9.   I thinck that the book it’s not old bad...
   10. Because      is a man who the animals are his best friends...
   11. Because      it’s all the world desert and the last persons have
        to defend about the zombies...
   12. ..but     the most horrible film that I’ve never watch is...
   13. I   thing that storis are quite good but always say the same
        thing, the autor only things abud bad things...
   14. The    next year they will release the second part in Spain
        and I’m waiting for it!
   15. I   can’t start this comment of the book if I don’t say before
        my opinion of terror stories.
   16. For   my, the most frightening things are...

Error analysis 3r

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    ERROR ANALYSIS 3RESO NOVEMBER 2012 Find the mistakes and try to improve the following sentences: 1. And this storys never finish fine, all people death... 2. ...but their friends were died... 3. I don’t like these book because I don’t like the histories about assassins. 4. The most frightnening film I have ever saw... 5. ...because it dies very people. 6. It is very fright because a girl was segrested and she could scape... 7. the most important thing in this book is that make you think in almost everithing, live, dead, terror, madnnes... 8. he kill the cat and her wife because he pretend kill his cat... 9. I thinck that the book it’s not old bad... 10. Because is a man who the animals are his best friends... 11. Because it’s all the world desert and the last persons have to defend about the zombies... 12. ..but the most horrible film that I’ve never watch is... 13. I thing that storis are quite good but always say the same thing, the autor only things abud bad things... 14. The next year they will release the second part in Spain and I’m waiting for it! 15. I can’t start this comment of the book if I don’t say before my opinion of terror stories. 16. For my, the most frightening things are...