The author made edits to a document by using synonyms, spell check, grammar check, and adding examples and punctuation. Edits included replacing a word with a synonym, correcting spelling mistakes, adding a comma for clarity, and expanding a sentence by providing an example.

1. I chose to change the word create into
produce, I done this by right clicking the word
and clicking the Synonyms button which was
on the drop down section, I had a variety of
words to choose and felt that produce fit well
with the sentence.

2. I realised there was a spelling mistake in the sentence
and used spell check to find the correct spelling, which
by clicking the change button automatically alters the
mistake.

3. I used the spelling and grammar check to correct the
sentence as I misspelt the word.

4. I realised that I needed to edit
this sentence because it in
fact was not true and the
presentation I had made was
not below the entry.

5. I realised a coma was
needed here, this
sentence would be too
long if not.

6. As you can see I edited the sentence by
adding an example of what a panning
shot is, the sentence was very dull before
and now has an explanation of the
example.