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Draft Script 1
By Nicole Simmonds
Scene 1
• Close up of key turning in door
• Long shot/High angle of girl entering through door
• Side angle/long shot of girl placing box down
• Medium shot of girl trying to turn the lights on
Scene 2
• Close up/ Fake jump scare of girl lighting a match
• Close up/low angle shot of girl placing candles in a line
• Panning shot of girl in an empty bedroom placing candles
around
• Long shot of girl walking towards mirror door
• Medium shot of girl sliding mirror door and ghost appears
Scene 3
• Low angle shot/medium shot of girl on the
phone to friend ‘I think someone's in my
house’
• Long shot of ghost walking behind her
• Low angle shot behind girl walking up the
stairs covered in candles
Subliminal cuts
• Medium shot girl peering round the corner
• POV shot opening the door to where the ghost
lives
• Close up of girl looking frightened and shocked
• High angle shot of girl sleeping and ghost attacks
her
• Close up of ghosts hand opening the door
• Low angle shot/ Close up girl running away from
the ghost
• Medium shot of the ghost behind the glass door
End scene
• Close up/ Jump scare of girl lighting a match in
the dark and the ghost appears behind her
creating a scare factor for the audience

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Draft script 1

  • 1. Draft Script 1 By Nicole Simmonds
  • 2. Scene 1 • Close up of key turning in door • Long shot/High angle of girl entering through door • Side angle/long shot of girl placing box down • Medium shot of girl trying to turn the lights on
  • 3. Scene 2 • Close up/ Fake jump scare of girl lighting a match • Close up/low angle shot of girl placing candles in a line • Panning shot of girl in an empty bedroom placing candles around • Long shot of girl walking towards mirror door • Medium shot of girl sliding mirror door and ghost appears
  • 4. Scene 3 • Low angle shot/medium shot of girl on the phone to friend ‘I think someone's in my house’ • Long shot of ghost walking behind her • Low angle shot behind girl walking up the stairs covered in candles
  • 5. Subliminal cuts • Medium shot girl peering round the corner • POV shot opening the door to where the ghost lives • Close up of girl looking frightened and shocked • High angle shot of girl sleeping and ghost attacks her • Close up of ghosts hand opening the door • Low angle shot/ Close up girl running away from the ghost • Medium shot of the ghost behind the glass door
  • 6. End scene • Close up/ Jump scare of girl lighting a match in the dark and the ghost appears behind her creating a scare factor for the audience