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Draft 4 Revised Planning
By Luca
Our Plan
• For our last Draft, we want to continue the idea of a slow build up with a
climactic ending that scared the audience.
• We also want to incorporate out audience’s idea of a mirror reveal at the end
of out OTS to create a jump scare.
• We also plan to use much more blood in order to scare the audience, as
there was a real lack within the Draft 3.
RevisedTimeline
Revised Storyboards
Revised Script
After feedback, we are up leveling our script as we had previously forgot the .INT (Interior) and .EXT
(Exterior) for our locations. Due to only having one location, we will need to add .INT to our setting line.
Revised Sound and Font
• For our sound we will be using the previous song from Draft 3, so there will
be no revisions to either sound or foley. Our song choice is still ‘Throne of
Blood’.
• For our Font, we will also not be changing the text or colour. However we
will be changing the placement, so that it aligns with the scenario, like
within the syringe shot.This will be done for just half of our credits.

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Draft 4 revised planning

  • 1. Draft 4 Revised Planning By Luca
  • 2. Our Plan • For our last Draft, we want to continue the idea of a slow build up with a climactic ending that scared the audience. • We also want to incorporate out audience’s idea of a mirror reveal at the end of out OTS to create a jump scare. • We also plan to use much more blood in order to scare the audience, as there was a real lack within the Draft 3.
  • 5. Revised Script After feedback, we are up leveling our script as we had previously forgot the .INT (Interior) and .EXT (Exterior) for our locations. Due to only having one location, we will need to add .INT to our setting line.
  • 6. Revised Sound and Font • For our sound we will be using the previous song from Draft 3, so there will be no revisions to either sound or foley. Our song choice is still ‘Throne of Blood’. • For our Font, we will also not be changing the text or colour. However we will be changing the placement, so that it aligns with the scenario, like within the syringe shot.This will be done for just half of our credits.