The document summarizes feedback from 4 people ages 16-24 on an ancillary draft for a documentary. When asked about the documentary topic based on the image, responses included technology taking over minds, the internet controlling society, and people becoming cyborgs or consumed by computers. Regarding watching it, one said yes due to the alarming image while another said no due to lack of interest in online sites. On layout, one liked the mouse continuing to the end while another said it was dull. Regarding the image relating to the topic, one recognized the Twitter page while others said no or it was misleading regarding cyborgs.

1. Draft 4 – ancillary
auDience feeDback
Gledis Dedaj

2. PeoPle intervieweD
• I interviewed a total of 4 people of ages ranging from 16 to 24.
• This way I can get a range of answers across our target audience.
Name: Age: Gender: Ethnicity: Hobbies:
Maria Musta 21 Female Turkish Reading, shopping,
(person 1) travelling and going to
the theatre.
Sally Da Silva 22 Female British - Portuguese Watching films,
(person 2) travelling, socialising
and reading books.
Jenny Jaffa 24 Female Albanian Going to the theatre,
(person 3) shopping, socialising
and swimming.
David Reid 16 Male British Playing football,
(person 4) watching movies and
playing computers
games.

3. Questions asked
1. What do you think the documentary is about based on
what you saw?
2. What does the image tell you about the documentary?
3. Would you watch the documentary based on the
ancillary texts?
4. Does the layout and design catch your eye?
5. Do you think the image relates to our documentary
topic?

4. Response summaRy
Question 1 : What do you think the documentary is about based on what you saw?
Person: Summary of their answer:
1 – Maria Musta • Something to do with technology taking over our
minds.
2 – Sally Da Silva • The Internet controlling society.
3 – Jenny Jaffa • People becoming cyborgs and robots.
4 – David Reid • People becoming consumed by computer technology.

5. Response summaRy
Question 2 : What does the image tell you about the documentary?
Person: Summary of their answer:
1 – Maria Musta • That it will concern the issues with new technology.
2 – Sally Da Silva • That it will talk about how people are obsessed with
going online.
3 – Jenny Jaffa • Its a series about the future of robots taking over in
the future.
4 – David Reid • It's a topic about people spending too many ours on
computers.

6. Response summaRy
Question 3 : Would you watch the documentary based on the ancillary texts?
Person: Summary of their answer:
1 – Maria Musta • Yes, because it looks quite alarming (the blood on the
end of the wire attached to the persons head).
2 – Sally Da Silva • No, because I have no interest in online sites.
3 – Jenny Jaffa • Yes, because it seems like an interesting topic that
concerns me.
4 – David Reid • Maybe, because its a topic that's already been
covered but the images are intriguing.

7. Response summaRy
Question 4 : Does the layout and design catch your eye?
Person: Summary of their answer:
1 – Maria Musta • Yes, because I like the way the mouse continues to the
end of the page.
2 – Sally Da Silva • Yes, I think the kerning of the text is interesting.
3 – Jenny Jaffa • Yes, but it's a little dull and plain.
4 – David Reid • No, because it’s a very common layout and the
colours are very plain.

8. Response summaRy
Question 5 : Do you think the image relates to our documentary topic?
Person: Summary of their answer:
1 – Maria Musta • No, I didn't get social media from the image or title.
2 – Sally Da Silva • Yes, I recognised the Twitter page on the screen of the
laptop.
3 – Jenny Jaffa • No, the images are misleading. I got the message of
cyborgs.
4 – David Reid • A little, because of the computer screens.