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1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back. 2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment, threatening him with a gun. 3) A fight ensues and the mysterious man beats and shoots the young man, killing him. He is then called by his boss to complete other similar jobs.
M.o.b script done
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back. 2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment, threatening him with a gun. 3) A fight ensues and the mysterious man beats and shoots the young man, killing him. He is then called by his boss to complete other similar jobs.
Script log properly done!
The client provided positive feedback on the script, praising the dialogue and black comedy aspects. Some formatting errors and overly descriptive passages were noted. For the second meeting, the client confirmed the script errors had been addressed and concluded the script was engaging, innovative, and ready to submit after appreciating the black humor in the dialogue.
Shooting script table post done rework 9
The document is a shooting script that outlines 81 shots detailing an encounter between a Young Man and a Mysterious Man. The Young Man approaches the Mysterious Man to borrow money, but later realizes the man is dangerous. A confrontation ensues where the Mysterious Man violently beats and eventually shoots the Young Man. The script reveals the Mysterious Man works as an enforcer for a criminal boss.
M.o.b script done proper 5
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back.
2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment through violence, beating him up and shooting him when he cannot pay.
3) The mysterious man calls his boss to report that the young man "paid in blood", and they joke about "gnoming" others who owe their criminal organization money.
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M.o.b script first draft 15
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back. 2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment, threatening him with a gun. 3) A fight ensues and the mysterious man beats and shoots the young man, killing him. He is then called by his boss to complete other similar jobs.
M.o.b script done
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back. 2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment, threatening him with a gun. 3) A fight ensues and the mysterious man beats and shoots the young man, killing him. He is then called by his boss to complete other similar jobs.
Script log properly done!
The client provided positive feedback on the script, praising the dialogue and black comedy aspects. Some formatting errors and overly descriptive passages were noted. For the second meeting, the client confirmed the script errors had been addressed and concluded the script was engaging, innovative, and ready to submit after appreciating the black humor in the dialogue.
Shooting script table post done rework 9
The document is a shooting script that outlines 81 shots detailing an encounter between a Young Man and a Mysterious Man. The Young Man approaches the Mysterious Man to borrow money, but later realizes the man is dangerous. A confrontation ensues where the Mysterious Man violently beats and eventually shoots the Young Man. The script reveals the Mysterious Man works as an enforcer for a criminal boss.
M.o.b script done proper 5
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back.
2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment through violence, beating him up and shooting him when he cannot pay.
3) The mysterious man calls his boss to report that the young man "paid in blood", and they joke about "gnoming" others who owe their criminal organization money.
Revised key scene done
The key scene has not changed much from the original pitch extract, as both the author and client felt the dialogue and story worked well as written. Minor formatting errors were corrected, such as leaving spaces between headings and descriptions. Otherwise, it was decided best to leave the key scene as is since it was already effective.
Work plan new done
The document outlines a work plan for a film called "M.O.B - Money or Blood?". It will be launched on April 10th, 2020. Two over-18 actor friends, Oisin Kelleher and Joe Manzi, have agreed to star in the film. Filming locations are within walking distance so travel costs should be low. The maximum budget is £25 but the filmmaker hopes to spend only £5, with funds going towards makeup, costumes, and food for the actors.
Final film idea mind map done
This document contains a mind map for a final film idea that was split into two parts to make it readable. The mind map outlines the key elements of the planned film such as the plot, characters, themes and other details to develop the concept.
Radio script anaylis done
The document provides an analysis of the radio script "SmoothApparatus" which aired on BBC radio. It summarizes that the script follows standard radio formatting with scene descriptions and dialogue. The story depicts a morning after scenario where a couple, Sarah and David, face an uncertain future after it emerges that David may have cheated on Sarah during a night out. The narrative has a typical three act structure that introduces the characters, establishes normalcy, and creates conflict through Sarah's accusation that David cheated. The genre is drama, aimed at middle-aged, middle class women by portraying a realistic domestic situation they could relate to.
The breakfast club script analysis done
The document provides an analysis of the 1985 film "The Breakfast Club" including:
1) It begins with a quote from David Bowie to set the theme and Brian's opening monologue sets the scene without description.
2) The film follows five teenage students from different backgrounds who are brought together in Saturday detention and initially see themselves as having nothing in common.
3) It has a typical three act structure where the students start conforming to stereotypes but break them down through openly discussing their problems in detention.
4) As a coming-of-age teen comedy drama, it both fits and challenges conventions by revealing the humanity beneath stereotypes.
Peaky blinders script analysis done!
Peaky Blinders is a BBC crime drama series set in post-WW1 Birmingham following the Shelby family gang. The script excerpt is from the first episode and establishes the Shelby's power and influence over the area through lengthy descriptive passages before brief dialogue. The show has a typical 3 act narrative structure within episodes and blends crime drama genres with a modern soundtrack despite its historical setting. The target audience is identified as lower to middle class viewers who could relate to the working class characters and themes.
Red dead redemption analysis done!
Red Dead Redemption is a 2010 Western action-adventure video game set in the Western United States and Mexico in 1911-1914. Players control the character of John Marston, completing missions and exploring the open world. The game follows a typical three act narrative structure and places the player character in disequilibrium when he is forced to hunt down his former gang members. The target audience includes gamers who enjoy shooter games and the Western genre through both video games and films. They would be classified as D-B on the NRS Social Demographic scale and as Explorers or Strugglers on Rubicam and Young's 4CS scale due to enjoying exploration of the virtual world and escapism.
Script log done
The client provided positive feedback on the script, praising its dialogue, flow, and ability to find humor in a serious story. The client noted some formatting errors and suggested showing character traits and plot through actions on screen rather than lengthy descriptions. Overall, the client was extremely happy with the script and found it a funny and compelling black comedy thriller, only requesting some minor formatting and description changes.
Swot analysis done!
This document contains a SWOT (Strengths, Weaknesses, Opportunities, Threats) analysis of a film or script. The strengths include compelling characters, an engaging plot, and a build to an intense finale. Weaknesses are that character identities weren't always clear and an ambitious fight scene/murder may not translate well to screen. Opportunities exist for comic dialogue and tension, while threats include losing humor if lines aren't delivered properly or interesting shots not being captured as planned.
Shooting script table done properly definitely finito
The document is a shooting script that outlines 81 shots detailing a confrontation between a Young Man and a Mysterious Man. The Young Man approaches the Mysterious Man to borrow money, and later runs into him again. When the Young Man says he needs to go to the bank, the Mysterious Man becomes aggressive and demands repayment now. This leads to a physical altercation between the two men, culminating in the Mysterious Man shooting and killing the Young Man. The Mysterious Man then receives a call from his Boss and agrees to take on more jobs.
Shooting script table done properly finito
The document is a shooting script that outlines 81 shots for a film involving a confrontation between a Young Man and a Mysterious Man. The Young Man approaches the Mysterious Man to borrow money. Later when he cannot repay the debt, the Mysterious Man violently assaults the Young Man and ultimately shoots and kills him. The Mysterious Man is then seen speaking to his Boss on the phone, implying he has been hired to carry out violent acts.
M.o.b script done proper 3
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back. 2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment through violence. 3) A brutal fight ensues and the mysterious man shoots and kills the young man, revealing that he is a hitman for a criminal organization.
Short film ethical considerations done
The document discusses the ethical considerations of a short film including its age rating, content, distribution platform, and representation. The film would receive a 12 rating from the BBFC as the violence is mild and there is one instance of mild strong language. Scenes of violence are shown but any graphic wounds won't be lingered on. The film will be distributed on the website Short of the Week, which accepts films under 40 minutes that are story and character driven. The film focuses on two characters so there are no representation issues to note, and it does not discriminate in any way.
Short film legal report properly done
The filmmaker owns the filmed footage and will copyright it so that others must ask permission to use it if the film becomes successful. The actors are over 18 and have agreed to be in the film. Special effects were borrowed with permission from friends but do not require copyright. Most of the sound effects and musical score can be used without permission except for a Rolling Stones song, which would require permission and potentially royalties to use.
Work plan i5
The filmmaker will launch their darkly comedic action thriller "M.O.B - Money or Blood?" on April 10th, as spring is the perfect time for this unique but genre-recognizable film. They have recruited actors Oisin Kelleher and Joe Manzi, both over 18, to play the hitman and victim. The filmmaker aims to spend no more than £10 on makeup and potential song royalties, doing makeup themselves to save money.
Equipment table 13
The document lists the equipment, software, and assets the filmmaker will use to produce their film, along with the reasons for choosing each item and how they will be used. The key equipment includes a digital camera, tripod, SD cards, lights, headphones, and microphone. Important software includes Adobe Premiere Pro for editing, Photoshop for graphics, and Office suite for pre-production. Assets that will be used include a studio logo for the opening credits, special effects makeup for scenes, sound effects during key moments, and a musical score/song to add tension and character.
Media pitch leaflet done
The document contains proposals for two short films. The first is titled "M.O.B" and is a 10 minute action thriller about a young man who borrows money from a criminal gang and is then targeted by an assassin when he fails to repay the debt. The second proposed film is titled "Traitor" and is a 10-15 minute thriller about a British secret agent who is framed for treason by a mole within MI6. Both proposals include synopses of the plot, descriptions of target audiences, and draft scripts.
Pitch evaluation done
The author pitched two film ideas, "M.O.B- Money or Blood?" and "Traitor", to a client. For each idea, the author provided a handout with scripts and storyboards and gave a verbal presentation summarizing the plot, characters, and how the film would appeal to audiences and fit in the marketplace. The client responded positively and the author received good feedback, though next time the author may include PowerPoint images. The author will move forward with developing "M.O.B- Money or Blood?" as it was the stronger of the two ideas pitched.
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Revised key scene done
The key scene has not changed much from the original pitch extract, as both the author and client felt the dialogue and story worked well as written. Minor formatting errors were corrected, such as leaving spaces between headings and descriptions. Otherwise, it was decided best to leave the key scene as is since it was already effective.
Work plan new done
The document outlines a work plan for a film called "M.O.B - Money or Blood?". It will be launched on April 10th, 2020. Two over-18 actor friends, Oisin Kelleher and Joe Manzi, have agreed to star in the film. Filming locations are within walking distance so travel costs should be low. The maximum budget is £25 but the filmmaker hopes to spend only £5, with funds going towards makeup, costumes, and food for the actors.
Final film idea mind map done
This document contains a mind map for a final film idea that was split into two parts to make it readable. The mind map outlines the key elements of the planned film such as the plot, characters, themes and other details to develop the concept.
Radio script anaylis done
The document provides an analysis of the radio script "SmoothApparatus" which aired on BBC radio. It summarizes that the script follows standard radio formatting with scene descriptions and dialogue. The story depicts a morning after scenario where a couple, Sarah and David, face an uncertain future after it emerges that David may have cheated on Sarah during a night out. The narrative has a typical three act structure that introduces the characters, establishes normalcy, and creates conflict through Sarah's accusation that David cheated. The genre is drama, aimed at middle-aged, middle class women by portraying a realistic domestic situation they could relate to.
The breakfast club script analysis done
The document provides an analysis of the 1985 film "The Breakfast Club" including:
1) It begins with a quote from David Bowie to set the theme and Brian's opening monologue sets the scene without description.
2) The film follows five teenage students from different backgrounds who are brought together in Saturday detention and initially see themselves as having nothing in common.
3) It has a typical three act structure where the students start conforming to stereotypes but break them down through openly discussing their problems in detention.
4) As a coming-of-age teen comedy drama, it both fits and challenges conventions by revealing the humanity beneath stereotypes.
Peaky blinders script analysis done!
Peaky Blinders is a BBC crime drama series set in post-WW1 Birmingham following the Shelby family gang. The script excerpt is from the first episode and establishes the Shelby's power and influence over the area through lengthy descriptive passages before brief dialogue. The show has a typical 3 act narrative structure within episodes and blends crime drama genres with a modern soundtrack despite its historical setting. The target audience is identified as lower to middle class viewers who could relate to the working class characters and themes.
Red dead redemption analysis done!
Red Dead Redemption is a 2010 Western action-adventure video game set in the Western United States and Mexico in 1911-1914. Players control the character of John Marston, completing missions and exploring the open world. The game follows a typical three act narrative structure and places the player character in disequilibrium when he is forced to hunt down his former gang members. The target audience includes gamers who enjoy shooter games and the Western genre through both video games and films. They would be classified as D-B on the NRS Social Demographic scale and as Explorers or Strugglers on Rubicam and Young's 4CS scale due to enjoying exploration of the virtual world and escapism.
Script log done
The client provided positive feedback on the script, praising its dialogue, flow, and ability to find humor in a serious story. The client noted some formatting errors and suggested showing character traits and plot through actions on screen rather than lengthy descriptions. Overall, the client was extremely happy with the script and found it a funny and compelling black comedy thriller, only requesting some minor formatting and description changes.
Swot analysis done!
This document contains a SWOT (Strengths, Weaknesses, Opportunities, Threats) analysis of a film or script. The strengths include compelling characters, an engaging plot, and a build to an intense finale. Weaknesses are that character identities weren't always clear and an ambitious fight scene/murder may not translate well to screen. Opportunities exist for comic dialogue and tension, while threats include losing humor if lines aren't delivered properly or interesting shots not being captured as planned.
Shooting script table done properly definitely finito
The document is a shooting script that outlines 81 shots detailing a confrontation between a Young Man and a Mysterious Man. The Young Man approaches the Mysterious Man to borrow money, and later runs into him again. When the Young Man says he needs to go to the bank, the Mysterious Man becomes aggressive and demands repayment now. This leads to a physical altercation between the two men, culminating in the Mysterious Man shooting and killing the Young Man. The Mysterious Man then receives a call from his Boss and agrees to take on more jobs.
Shooting script table done properly finito
The document is a shooting script that outlines 81 shots for a film involving a confrontation between a Young Man and a Mysterious Man. The Young Man approaches the Mysterious Man to borrow money. Later when he cannot repay the debt, the Mysterious Man violently assaults the Young Man and ultimately shoots and kills him. The Mysterious Man is then seen speaking to his Boss on the phone, implying he has been hired to carry out violent acts.
M.o.b script done proper 3
1) A young man borrows money from a mysterious man to buy his girlfriend a present but has no way to pay it back. 2) The next day, the mysterious man confronts the young man and demands repayment through violence. 3) A brutal fight ensues and the mysterious man shoots and kills the young man, revealing that he is a hitman for a criminal organization.
Short film ethical considerations done
The document discusses the ethical considerations of a short film including its age rating, content, distribution platform, and representation. The film would receive a 12 rating from the BBFC as the violence is mild and there is one instance of mild strong language. Scenes of violence are shown but any graphic wounds won't be lingered on. The film will be distributed on the website Short of the Week, which accepts films under 40 minutes that are story and character driven. The film focuses on two characters so there are no representation issues to note, and it does not discriminate in any way.
Short film legal report properly done
The filmmaker owns the filmed footage and will copyright it so that others must ask permission to use it if the film becomes successful. The actors are over 18 and have agreed to be in the film. Special effects were borrowed with permission from friends but do not require copyright. Most of the sound effects and musical score can be used without permission except for a Rolling Stones song, which would require permission and potentially royalties to use.
Work plan i5
The filmmaker will launch their darkly comedic action thriller "M.O.B - Money or Blood?" on April 10th, as spring is the perfect time for this unique but genre-recognizable film. They have recruited actors Oisin Kelleher and Joe Manzi, both over 18, to play the hitman and victim. The filmmaker aims to spend no more than £10 on makeup and potential song royalties, doing makeup themselves to save money.
Equipment table 13
The document lists the equipment, software, and assets the filmmaker will use to produce their film, along with the reasons for choosing each item and how they will be used. The key equipment includes a digital camera, tripod, SD cards, lights, headphones, and microphone. Important software includes Adobe Premiere Pro for editing, Photoshop for graphics, and Office suite for pre-production. Assets that will be used include a studio logo for the opening credits, special effects makeup for scenes, sound effects during key moments, and a musical score/song to add tension and character.
Media pitch leaflet done
The document contains proposals for two short films. The first is titled "M.O.B" and is a 10 minute action thriller about a young man who borrows money from a criminal gang and is then targeted by an assassin when he fails to repay the debt. The second proposed film is titled "Traitor" and is a 10-15 minute thriller about a British secret agent who is framed for treason by a mole within MI6. Both proposals include synopses of the plot, descriptions of target audiences, and draft scripts.
Pitch evaluation done
The author pitched two film ideas, "M.O.B- Money or Blood?" and "Traitor", to a client. For each idea, the author provided a handout with scripts and storyboards and gave a verbal presentation summarizing the plot, characters, and how the film would appeal to audiences and fit in the marketplace. The client responded positively and the author received good feedback, though next time the author may include PowerPoint images. The author will move forward with developing "M.O.B- Money or Blood?" as it was the stronger of the two ideas pitched.
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