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Developing a Thesis Statement
Once you’ve started reading about your topic, you will need to begin
thinking about a thesis statement. This is an argument. It’s not an
observation. As you are researching, consider: Why would anyone be interested in this
topic? What do I think is important for people to know? How has my topic influenced the
world? Why is this something that people should be concerned about? Note, a thesis
statement should not be an observation. And it should not be something that someone
could prove with 100% certainty.
The best thesis statement will be one that I have never considered before. It is a
“controlling idea” that will frame the rest of your paper. EVERYTHING from that point
forward will be an attempt to illustrate and prove that what you argue is true. While you
will need an initial thesis statement to get started, your argument may change as you
continue your research and learn more about your topic. You are not “locked in” to this
original thesis.
Remember that you will write every single paragraph with the sole purpose of proving your
thesis. If you have a paragraph that seems irrelevant to your thesis, you have two choices:
get rid of it or rewrite your thesis to reflect the addition of new information.
Examples of good thesis statements:
Broad Topic

Specific Topic

Media/Movies

Disney Movies

Disney movies, while intended for children,
contain subliminal messages that have a
direct negative influence on the developing
mind.

Education

High Stakes Tests

The emphasis placed on standardized testing
in United States education has focused
learning on the wrong areas and has lowered
the standards in our schools.

Birth Control

Planned Parenthood Schools in the United States should be
in Schools
mandated by law to have a free Planned
Parenthood office available to students
because this would reduce teen pregnancy
rates and increase the prevention of STDs.

College

Difficulties of the
college transition

.

Thesis Statement

High school graduates should be required to take a
year off to pursue community service
projects before entering college in order to
increase their maturity and global awareness
Developing a thesis statement

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Developing a thesis statement

  • 1. Developing a Thesis Statement Once you’ve started reading about your topic, you will need to begin thinking about a thesis statement. This is an argument. It’s not an observation. As you are researching, consider: Why would anyone be interested in this topic? What do I think is important for people to know? How has my topic influenced the world? Why is this something that people should be concerned about? Note, a thesis statement should not be an observation. And it should not be something that someone could prove with 100% certainty. The best thesis statement will be one that I have never considered before. It is a “controlling idea” that will frame the rest of your paper. EVERYTHING from that point forward will be an attempt to illustrate and prove that what you argue is true. While you will need an initial thesis statement to get started, your argument may change as you continue your research and learn more about your topic. You are not “locked in” to this original thesis. Remember that you will write every single paragraph with the sole purpose of proving your thesis. If you have a paragraph that seems irrelevant to your thesis, you have two choices: get rid of it or rewrite your thesis to reflect the addition of new information. Examples of good thesis statements: Broad Topic Specific Topic Media/Movies Disney Movies Disney movies, while intended for children, contain subliminal messages that have a direct negative influence on the developing mind. Education High Stakes Tests The emphasis placed on standardized testing in United States education has focused learning on the wrong areas and has lowered the standards in our schools. Birth Control Planned Parenthood Schools in the United States should be in Schools mandated by law to have a free Planned Parenthood office available to students because this would reduce teen pregnancy rates and increase the prevention of STDs. College Difficulties of the college transition . Thesis Statement High school graduates should be required to take a year off to pursue community service projects before entering college in order to increase their maturity and global awareness