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Copy Editing
Kathleen McElroy, ASNE High School
Journalism Institute
June 2013
Editing From Hell
Kathleen McElroy, ASNE High School
Journalism Institute
June 2013
I’ll tell you my editing horror
stories only if you tell me yours
3
 Working with writers
 Editing for context
(Ethics, Part II?)
 Voices and sources
 Editing for structure
 Proofing
 Corrections (heavy sigh)
4
Working with writers
• Editing is individual,
but it’s not subjective.
• Editing is not personal.
You are editing the
copy, not the person.
• Writers may have an
easier time saying out
loud what they mean.
• Engage the writer in the
editing process.
• It’s usually easier to do a
SECOND READ with the
reporter at hand.
5
Editing for context
• Why this story, and
why now?
• Who or what
benefits? Who or
what is harmed?
• Is it factual but still
misleading?
• Does writing reflect
assignment? Why did
the reporting shift?
• Are there any holes?
• Does it answer: who,
what, where, when, how,
how much, why and why
care?
• Is there enough
background?
• Does this story say
anything? Can you write
a headline without
rereading three times? 6
Voices and sources
• Same people quoted issue after issue?
• Misleading “people on the street” polls or
opinion: Is community or student population
represented? Are these convenient and friendly
voices?
• More voices needed for dimension and/or
fairness?
• Is topic placed in context by including information
from an outside or unbiased observer? Third-
person source.
7
Voices and sources
• Is there “another side” to the story or to the
contentions of the main sources? Is that other
side, or sides, presented and is it given
appropriate weight?
• When an explicit or implicit accusation is raised,
does the target have an opportunity to respond?
8
Voices and sources
• Are racial, sexual, religious or ethnic references
relevant? Are they applied equally?
• Are there too many quotes? Should they be
paraphrased?
• Is the sexy quote really relevant?
• Do the quotes have their own agenda? Are they
making fun of subjects, or unnecessarily putting
them in a bad light?
• Are quotes from email? Do they read that way?
9
Editing for structure:
Lede and cosmic graph
Rest of the story
Tone and style
Details
10
Lede and cosmic graph
• Is the beginning
inviting?
• It’s not news that
meetings or events
were held.
• Does inviting intro fit
point of story?
• If lede is anecdotal,
et al., is there
a cosmic graph?
• Is first paragraph easy to
understand? If a hard-
news story, could you
write a headline based
on lede?
• Too much information
in the first sentence or
graph?
• Doubts about the lede?
Hunt for a “buried” one.
11
12
AUSTIN — As 17,000 runners crowded at the start of the
Livestrong Austin Marathon Feb. 17, they jogged in place and
jumped up and down to fend off the 40-degree early-morning
chill. When the buzzer sounded, they sped off down the course,
shedding the extra clothes they had worn to stay warm.
As the runners disappeared north on Congress Avenue,
a crew of 30 Goodwill volunteers moved onto the course to
pick up the sweats and other clothes they had left behind.
For the second consecutive year, Goodwill Industries of Central
Texas organized an effort to pick up and recycle runners’ discarded
clothes as part of the organization’s Clothing Sweep program.
Before Goodwill created the Clean Sweep program in 2011,
abandoned clothing was collected by a different small charity each
year, or thrown out with the rest of the race-day trash. This year,
Shea Pullan, community engagement coordinator at Goodwill, said
the volunteers collected 1,766 pounds of clothing.
13
14
15
The rest of the story
• Is information where readers want to find it,
or are important details left to the end?
• Too long? If you were a fellow student,
teacher or administrator, how much would
you read?
• Does every paragraph contribute? Is too
much information being included, either out
of fear or enthusiasm?
• Does the ending fit the beginning?
16
Tone and style
• Be short, familiar and specific.
• An attempt to sound intellectual by being
wordy or using big words?
• Too much jargon or insider terms?
• Does the tone fit the subject matter? Is the
tone consistent?
17
Details
• Grammar is crucial; style can be adapted.
• Too many adjectives because the nouns and
verbs aren’t more more specific?
• Is background information inserted in the
right sentences?
18
Proof-reading
• Double-check proper names and claims of
distinction (first, best, oldest, tallest).
• Does the math work? Is it “millions” or
“billions”? Percentages figured correctly?
• Look for typos early and often: misspellings,
missing or duplicated words.
• On deadline, check at least the first and the
last graphs, where many mistakes hide.
• If you see something, mark it immediately.
You may not remember it later.
19
20
Online Corrections
• Correct online errors immediately.
• “An earlier version of this article misspelled
the surname of Lamar’s vice principal.”
• If an editor inserted the error, try this:
“Because of an editing error, an earlier version
of this article misspelled the surname of
Lamar’s vice principal.”
• Online corrections don’t need to repeat
the error.
21
22
Print Corrections
• Printed errors should be corrected by next
publication, with the mistake repeated.
• “In the last issue, the page 4 article about
temporary classrooms misspelled the surname
of Lamar’s vice principal. His name is Bobby
Reynolds, not Reynoso.”
• Only correct typos that cause factual errors.
23
More questions, comments?
24
Thank you!
Kathleen McElroy
kathleenmcelroy@utexas.edu
komcelroy@gmail.com
917-693-0548
25

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  • 1. Copy Editing Kathleen McElroy, ASNE High School Journalism Institute June 2013
  • 2. Editing From Hell Kathleen McElroy, ASNE High School Journalism Institute June 2013
  • 3. I’ll tell you my editing horror stories only if you tell me yours 3
  • 4.  Working with writers  Editing for context (Ethics, Part II?)  Voices and sources  Editing for structure  Proofing  Corrections (heavy sigh) 4
  • 5. Working with writers • Editing is individual, but it’s not subjective. • Editing is not personal. You are editing the copy, not the person. • Writers may have an easier time saying out loud what they mean. • Engage the writer in the editing process. • It’s usually easier to do a SECOND READ with the reporter at hand. 5
  • 6. Editing for context • Why this story, and why now? • Who or what benefits? Who or what is harmed? • Is it factual but still misleading? • Does writing reflect assignment? Why did the reporting shift? • Are there any holes? • Does it answer: who, what, where, when, how, how much, why and why care? • Is there enough background? • Does this story say anything? Can you write a headline without rereading three times? 6
  • 7. Voices and sources • Same people quoted issue after issue? • Misleading “people on the street” polls or opinion: Is community or student population represented? Are these convenient and friendly voices? • More voices needed for dimension and/or fairness? • Is topic placed in context by including information from an outside or unbiased observer? Third- person source. 7
  • 8. Voices and sources • Is there “another side” to the story or to the contentions of the main sources? Is that other side, or sides, presented and is it given appropriate weight? • When an explicit or implicit accusation is raised, does the target have an opportunity to respond? 8
  • 9. Voices and sources • Are racial, sexual, religious or ethnic references relevant? Are they applied equally? • Are there too many quotes? Should they be paraphrased? • Is the sexy quote really relevant? • Do the quotes have their own agenda? Are they making fun of subjects, or unnecessarily putting them in a bad light? • Are quotes from email? Do they read that way? 9
  • 10. Editing for structure: Lede and cosmic graph Rest of the story Tone and style Details 10
  • 11. Lede and cosmic graph • Is the beginning inviting? • It’s not news that meetings or events were held. • Does inviting intro fit point of story? • If lede is anecdotal, et al., is there a cosmic graph? • Is first paragraph easy to understand? If a hard- news story, could you write a headline based on lede? • Too much information in the first sentence or graph? • Doubts about the lede? Hunt for a “buried” one. 11
  • 12. 12 AUSTIN — As 17,000 runners crowded at the start of the Livestrong Austin Marathon Feb. 17, they jogged in place and jumped up and down to fend off the 40-degree early-morning chill. When the buzzer sounded, they sped off down the course, shedding the extra clothes they had worn to stay warm. As the runners disappeared north on Congress Avenue, a crew of 30 Goodwill volunteers moved onto the course to pick up the sweats and other clothes they had left behind. For the second consecutive year, Goodwill Industries of Central Texas organized an effort to pick up and recycle runners’ discarded clothes as part of the organization’s Clothing Sweep program. Before Goodwill created the Clean Sweep program in 2011, abandoned clothing was collected by a different small charity each year, or thrown out with the rest of the race-day trash. This year, Shea Pullan, community engagement coordinator at Goodwill, said the volunteers collected 1,766 pounds of clothing.
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  • 16. The rest of the story • Is information where readers want to find it, or are important details left to the end? • Too long? If you were a fellow student, teacher or administrator, how much would you read? • Does every paragraph contribute? Is too much information being included, either out of fear or enthusiasm? • Does the ending fit the beginning? 16
  • 17. Tone and style • Be short, familiar and specific. • An attempt to sound intellectual by being wordy or using big words? • Too much jargon or insider terms? • Does the tone fit the subject matter? Is the tone consistent? 17
  • 18. Details • Grammar is crucial; style can be adapted. • Too many adjectives because the nouns and verbs aren’t more more specific? • Is background information inserted in the right sentences? 18
  • 19. Proof-reading • Double-check proper names and claims of distinction (first, best, oldest, tallest). • Does the math work? Is it “millions” or “billions”? Percentages figured correctly? • Look for typos early and often: misspellings, missing or duplicated words. • On deadline, check at least the first and the last graphs, where many mistakes hide. • If you see something, mark it immediately. You may not remember it later. 19
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  • 21. Online Corrections • Correct online errors immediately. • “An earlier version of this article misspelled the surname of Lamar’s vice principal.” • If an editor inserted the error, try this: “Because of an editing error, an earlier version of this article misspelled the surname of Lamar’s vice principal.” • Online corrections don’t need to repeat the error. 21
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  • 23. Print Corrections • Printed errors should be corrected by next publication, with the mistake repeated. • “In the last issue, the page 4 article about temporary classrooms misspelled the surname of Lamar’s vice principal. His name is Bobby Reynolds, not Reynoso.” • Only correct typos that cause factual errors. 23

Editor's Notes

  1. How many of you have correction policies?