Class 49
EWRT 1A
AGENDA
Speech Due
  Choose Order
Make up Vocab test
Revising Essay 2 or 3 ( Due Monday
 December 10th)
Speeches Due: Turn them In!
Oral Presentation Schedule:
 Schedule presentations:
  Wednesday, December 5th (6)
  Thursday, December 6th (6)
  Monday, December 10th (6)
  Final Class (Remaining)
 For each presentation class       you
  attend, you will receive ten
  participation points. I will take
  roll each day.
Make-up Vocabulary Exam

 You may make up any
  one exam (1-5).
 Let me know which
  one you want.
 You have 15 minutes to
  finish the Exam.
 May the force be with
  you!
Revising
Essay 2 or 3

(Due Monday Dec. 10th)
No Exceptions
Before you
                           begin


 Read my comments carefully.
   If you don’t see comments on your paper, there is a
    problem. Click on “view” and then “mark-up.” You
    should see both margin and in-text comments.

 Address those issues that you can, as you read.
 Then, read the slide that follow this one. They will
  guide you through the steps to revision.
 Remember, you must do more than “fix”
  grammatical errors to get a higher grade.
 Is your topic interesting?
Topic and       Is your thesis clear?
Thesis: Does    Does your thesis connect to
your topic       the topic and question?
address the     Is your thesis consistently
question?        upheld and supported
                 throughout the essay?
Organization, Structure, and Logic:

 Are the three essay
  components
  (thesis, body, conclusion)
  intact and clearly distinct?

 Are the three components
  clearly and logically linked so
  that the body supports the
  thesis and the conclusion ties
  them together?

 Does your essay seem logical;
  does it make sense?
Paragraphs and               Sentences:
     Transitions:

 Is each paragraph        Are your sentence
  well-structured, with     structures correct?
  a clear leading idea
  of its own and           Is your usage of
  supporting body?          tense consistent and
                            logical?
 Does each
  paragraph logically
  follow the preceding
  one and connect
  easily to the
  following one?
Words and Phrases:           Mechanics:


 Are all words spelled    Is your grammar
  correctly?                correct?
 Do all words and         Is your punctuation
  phrases mark proper       correct?
  usage?
 Have you used as
  few words as
  possible to express
  your thoughts?
Turning in your revision
  I will not accept ANY revised essays
   that are received after your class
   ends on December 10th.

  When you turn in your essay, you
   must submit these items:
   The original essay with my comments
   Your graded rubric
   Your revised essay.

  You may do this by hard copy or
   electronically.

  If you do not include all of these
   parts when you submit your essay, I
   will not read it for a higher grade.
HOMEWORK
 Revise Essay 2 or 3

 Practice Speech.



            Speeches begin Wednesday, December 5th. Everyone
            should be prepared to go first. If someone fails to show
            up, I may have to call for others to give speeches early.

Class 49

  • 1.
  • 2.
    AGENDA Speech Due Choose Order Make up Vocab test Revising Essay 2 or 3 ( Due Monday December 10th)
  • 3.
    Speeches Due: Turnthem In! Oral Presentation Schedule:  Schedule presentations:  Wednesday, December 5th (6)  Thursday, December 6th (6)  Monday, December 10th (6)  Final Class (Remaining)  For each presentation class you attend, you will receive ten participation points. I will take roll each day.
  • 4.
    Make-up Vocabulary Exam You may make up any one exam (1-5). Let me know which one you want. You have 15 minutes to finish the Exam. May the force be with you!
  • 5.
    Revising Essay 2 or3 (Due Monday Dec. 10th) No Exceptions
  • 6.
    Before you begin  Read my comments carefully.  If you don’t see comments on your paper, there is a problem. Click on “view” and then “mark-up.” You should see both margin and in-text comments.  Address those issues that you can, as you read.  Then, read the slide that follow this one. They will guide you through the steps to revision.  Remember, you must do more than “fix” grammatical errors to get a higher grade.
  • 7.
     Is yourtopic interesting? Topic and  Is your thesis clear? Thesis: Does  Does your thesis connect to your topic the topic and question? address the  Is your thesis consistently question? upheld and supported throughout the essay?
  • 8.
    Organization, Structure, andLogic:  Are the three essay components (thesis, body, conclusion) intact and clearly distinct?  Are the three components clearly and logically linked so that the body supports the thesis and the conclusion ties them together?  Does your essay seem logical; does it make sense?
  • 9.
    Paragraphs and Sentences: Transitions:  Is each paragraph  Are your sentence well-structured, with structures correct? a clear leading idea of its own and  Is your usage of supporting body? tense consistent and logical?  Does each paragraph logically follow the preceding one and connect easily to the following one?
  • 10.
    Words and Phrases: Mechanics:  Are all words spelled  Is your grammar correctly? correct?  Do all words and  Is your punctuation phrases mark proper correct? usage?  Have you used as few words as possible to express your thoughts?
  • 11.
    Turning in yourrevision  I will not accept ANY revised essays that are received after your class ends on December 10th.  When you turn in your essay, you must submit these items:  The original essay with my comments  Your graded rubric  Your revised essay.  You may do this by hard copy or electronically.  If you do not include all of these parts when you submit your essay, I will not read it for a higher grade.
  • 12.
    HOMEWORK  Revise Essay2 or 3  Practice Speech. Speeches begin Wednesday, December 5th. Everyone should be prepared to go first. If someone fails to show up, I may have to call for others to give speeches early.