The document summarizes and evaluates two student blogs for an assignment. The first blog by Debbie Marques included many pictures from filming but could have benefitted from more written work. It receives a grade of C. The second blog by Abigail Edwards was well-organized with pictures, drafts, and research on storyboards. While thorough, it lacked additional details like a vlog. It receives an A/B grade for its comprehensive content.

1. Assignment 2 Blog analysis.
Doing most (2 blogs)
Ingrid De Souza 12M

2.  Debbie Marques’s blog.
 WWW: Debbie uploaded a lot of pictures during her filming, which is the proof
that she and her group acting out their 2mins film. And she updated some of
her working by using the Vlog.
 EBI: It would’ve been better if she spent more of her work on the Blog, typing.
Although it was good that she uploaded pictures and vlogs.
I would give her C because the blog she has
all the information, but it just seems to be a
big rushed towards the end.

3.  Abigail Edwards’ blog.
 WWW: Abigail’s blog, is very organized, she used loads of
pictures, including a picture of her own worksheets, she also
uploaded her drafts. And she even uploaded her own research
on how to do a storyboard.
• EBI: Abigail’s blog would’ve got a higher grade if
she uploaded more information about her works, or
even a Vlog.
I would give Abigail an A/B grade. This is
because she used a lot of information
and even showed the examiner and
teacher that she made her own research
on the things she done.