APA Style, Writing and You

       A.P.A. DOESN’T MEAN
“AGGRAVATING PAPER APPLICATIONS”




Presenter: Nichole Hertel, M.Ed.
Doctoral Resident and Teaching Fellow
University of Houston
Tonight’s Agenda

 Jokes
 Some Questions about APA
 What is APA Style?
 Define “education”
 Helpful Advice to Survive Writing
 Brief Overview of the Dissertation Chapters
 APA Formatting of Your Paper
 Any Questions?
Jokes – In Honor of Halloween

 What is a Mummy's favorite type of music?
   Wrap!!!!!

 Why do demons and ghouls hang out together?
   Because demons are a ghouls best friend!

 What's a monster's favorite bean?
   A human bean.

 Why can't the boy ghost have babies?
   Because he has a Hallo-weenie.
About Me

 3rd year doctoral student – C&I
   graduate in summer (hopefully!)

 Bachelor of Journalism (UH )
 Master in Education, Secondary Instruction (HBU)
 Taught secondary and elementary grades
 Currently teach Class Mgmt to pre-service teachers
  at Sugar Land and Main campuses
 Mom of two
So, Why Am I here?
And Because…
Before We Begin, Let’s Answer
          Some Questions about APA…

 What is APA?
 Why is it so important?
 What does it do and do I benefit from it?
 Why do we use it in the field of education?
What is the APA?

 APA = The American Psychological Association
     a professional organization representing psychologists in the U.S.
       around 150,000 members
       an annual budget of around $70M

 Founded in July 1892 at Clark University by a group of
  26 men
   First president was G. Stanley Hall

 There are currently 54 divisions and it is affiliated with
  60 state, territorial, and Canadian provincial associations

  (Note: Occasionally confused with the America Psychiatric Association)
APA Organization Mission Statement

 To advance psychology:
   as a science and profession and
   as a means of promoting health, education, and human welfare by the
    encouragement of psychology in all its branches in the broadest and
    most liberal manner;
   by the promotion of research in psychology and the improvement of
    research methods and conditions;
   by the improvement of the qualifications and usefulness of
    psychologists through high standards of ethics, conduct, education, and
    achievement;
   by the establishment and maintenance of the highest standards of
    professional ethics and conduct of the members of the Association;
   by the increase and diffusion of psychological knowledge through
    meetings, professional contacts, reports, papers, discussions, and
    publications;
   thereby to advance scientific interests and inquiry, and the application
    of research findings to the promotion of health, education, and the
    public welfare
What is APA Style?

 A widely accepted style of documentation
 particularly in the social sciences area

 Specifies multiple items within your paper:
   the names and order of headings

   paragraph formatting

   organization of citations and references,

   arrangement of tables, figures and appendices
What is APA Style? Cont.

   And it uses Harvard referencing keyed to a subsequent list of
    References
       Harvard referencing is also referred to as the author-date system of
        citations and parenthetical referencing


   The APA Publication Manual provides basic guidelines for
    documenting both print and electronic resources.
Why is APA Style So Important?

 For You…
   Can make organizing your paper MUCH easier



 For Your Reader…
   Can make your paper easier to read for your intended audience
What Does it Do & Do I Benefit From It? -YES!

 If you wish to publish in a psychological or
 educational journal, then this is the style you will
 need to follow

 It allows for protection in your writing through the
 use of references
     Protects sources/authors you are quoting from being plagiarized
     Protects you, the writer, from accusations of plagiarism
Why Do We Use It In the Education Field?

 Education is found under the social sciences
 umbrella
    The social sciences are comprise academic disciplines
     concerned with the study of the social life of human groups
     and individuals
        A few examples: Anthropology, communications studies,
         criminology, economics, geography, history, political science,
         psychology, social studies and sociology
What is “Education” Anyway?

 Education encompasses teaching others (outward)
 and learning specific skills (inward)

 It is the imparting of knowledge, positive judgment
 and well-developed wisdom from the inward self to
 and outward source
What is “Education” Anyway? Cont.

 “To educate” = to draw out
   From the Latin “educare”
          to facilitate the realization of an individual's potential and
           talents.


 It is an application of pedagogy
   a body of theoretical and applied research relating to teaching
    and learning
   specifically draws on disciplines such as psychology,
    philosophy, computer science, linguistics, neuroscience,
    sociology and anthropology
Why, again, is APA Style Used?

 Main reason: To give writers a standard format to
 follow when preparing their manuscripts for
 publication
    Makes the editorial process go smoother
    Provides editors with benchmarks against which to measure
     the quality of writing
    Rules make converting writte work into published pages a
     more consistent process
A Few Helpful Resources in Your Journey…




   Let’s take a look
       together
Now It’s Your Turn

 You will need these things for the next part:
   Something to write with

   This handout

   The second handout titled “Sample APA Style Used in A
    Candidacy Paper”
   The third titled “Levels of Heading”

   The fourth titled APA Sample Paper

   The dissertation in front of you (to share)

   Your brains
INHALE DEEPLY
      AND
  LET’S BEGIN
General Formatting for Education Papers

 First, the words “papers,” “proposal,” “candidacy
 paper,” “dissertation,” and “article” are going to
 mean the same thing in terms of this discussion
The Real Dissertations

 Thumb through the dissertation in front of you


 What do you see?
How Are the Papers Set Up?

 Cover Page
 Table of Contents
 Abstract
 Body of Paper
     Chapters
     Headings
     Sections and Subsections
     Tables and Figures
     Citations
 References
 Appendices
 Tables
 Figures
Body Chapters Briefly

 5 main dissertation chapters:
   The introductory part

   The literature review

   The methodology

   The results

   The discussion



 All dissertation chapters have their specific
 characteristics
Chapter 1: INTRODUCTION

 Presents the main problems which will be discussed
 in your dissertation

 Important to demonstrate that your work is
 significant

 Ending of this chapter is a statement of your
 research question

 Think: How you came to this topic
Chapter 2: LITERARY REVIEW

 Main points which were presented in other researches
  on this topic

 Qualitative studies "talk to" the literature
     can be integrated throughout the paper, with advisor's approval
 Quantitive studies present the literature


 Relatively small compared to the rest of the chapters
     4-5 concepts/key terms presented (develop completely)


 Think: History of my topic
Chapter 3: METHOLOGY

 Describes the methods and investigation


 Try to prove your ideas by different references


 Present your own ideas and viewpoints
    include strong rationales

 Will lead-in to your conclusion in the next chapter
    AKA persuasive argument paper


 Think: Turn your reader into an agreer
Chapter 4: RESULTS

 Sum up all of your research

 Show that all the necessary questions have been
 answered

 Be crystal clear and laconic

 Series of chapters/subchapters divided by logical and
 natural layout of the inquiry

 Think: Scientific Method Syntax (not actual scientific
 method used)
Chapter 5: DISCUSSION

 Compare your results with the results made by others


 Demonstrate your knowledge and skills in theory and
 practice

 End with the new knowledge you are bringing to the
 field (leads to Chapter 6)

 Think: The reason I should get an "A" on this
 assignment is because…
Chapter 6: REFLECTION

 Optional Chapter
   but push in Education now is on the self-reflective
    practitioner


 I call it the “I.E.S.” Chapter


 Think: What impact did my learning have directly
  on me?
Last Words on Dissertation Chapters

 Very important to create a logical connection
   often happens slowly

 The more interesting your info is presented, the
 more captivated your reader becomes in your paper
    Good for us because advisor/editors will read to enjoy and
     learn rather than to critique 
APA Within Your Paper

 Covers mainly Chapters 2-5
 Specific Parts Are:
   Sections and Subsections

   Headings

   Tables and Figures

   Citations

   References
Sections and Subsections

 Typically include the following 7 sections
     Title Page
     Abstract
     Body
     References
     Tables (new page for each table)
     Figure captions
     Figures (new page for each figure)


 Also, avoid having one sub-section heading in a paper.


 Let’s look at Handout #2
Headings

 Aid in establishing the hierarchy of the sections of a
 paper to help orient the reader

 Topics within a paper that have equal importance
 will have the same level of headings throughout the
 paper

 Can also function as an outline to reveal the papers
 organization
Levels of Headings

 Consists of five possible formatting arrangements, each
 according to the levels of subordination. The headings
 are numbered Level 1, Level 2, and so forth to Level 5
    Level 1: Centered, Boldface, Uppercase and Lowercase Headings
    Level 2: Left-aligned, Boldface, Uppercase and Lowercase Heading
    Level 3: Indented, boldface, lowercase heading with period.
    Level 4: Indented, boldface, italicized, lowercase heading with
              period.
    Level 5: Indented, italicized, lowercase heading with period


 Let’s Look at Handout 3
Tables and Figures

 “table” = data that is entered in columns and rows
 “figure” = all other kinds of illustration or
  representation of data
 Integrated throughout the paper where needed AND
  attached at the end of the document
 Data should not be just left as a narrative
    Put into SOME kind of graphic or chart form -- either as a
     table or as a figure (such as a bar graph or a pie chart)
Tables and Figures Cont.

 In the paper body, center table/figure and label all
 information
   Describe table (pretend the table is not there and your are telling the
     reader about it)
 At the end of the document after Appendices, one
  table/ figure per page
 What you should use depends on what facts you are
  trying to display
    Think: What is the most informative way to display the
     information?
Hints About Tables and Figures

 Figures
    should not have tick marks for the measures
    should have titles for the x and y axis
    should not have outline around the graph
    should not have minor lines on the chart
    the legend should either not exist if the graph is simple or should be
     inside the chart
    need to be on a figure captions page, with an explanation of the
     data represented
    do not have page numbers, and should have penciled in, on the back
     the top and the figure caption that corresponds to it.
 Tables
    do have page numbers
    do not have vertical lines
Citations

 Reference citations in text are done using
 parenthetical referencing
    Involves enclosing the author's surname and the date of
     publication within parentheses, separated by a comma,
     generally placed immediately after the reference or at the end
     of the sentence in which the reference is made.
    Also common for the authors to be the subject or object of a
     sentence.
    In the case of a quotation, the page number is also included in
     the citation.
Citation Examples

 Example 1 –
   Pauling (2005) writes that “after a successful experiment, I
    discovered a possible genetic cause of alcoholism” (p. 123).


 Example 2 –
   Pauling (2005) discovered a possible genetic cause of
    alcoholism.


 Example 3 -
   A recent study found a possible genetic cause of alcoholism
    (Pauling, 2005).
Direct vs. Indirect Quotes

 Direct Quotation = exactly what the author wrote


 Indirect Quotation = a paraphrasing of what the
 author wrote

 The same rules apply, the format being (Author,
 Year, Page Number).
Direct vs. Indirect Quote Examples

 Example #1 –
   When asked why his behavior had changed so dramatically,
    Max simply said he believed it was because of the
    reinforcement (Pauling, 2004, p. 69).


 Example #2 –
   When asked why his behavior had changed so dramatically,
    Max simply said, "I think it's the reinforcement" (Pauling,
    2004, p. 69).
Statistical Expressions in APA

 There are certain ways to do this as well
 Don’t be concerned about it yet
 If needed, ask Dr. Ruban for assistance
 Take EDRS 8382
References

 Full bibliographic information
 Found at the end of the paper
 Can only include articles that are cited within the
 body of an paper
    This is the distinction between a document having a Reference
     section and a bibliography, which may incorporate sources
     which may have been read by the authors as background, but
     not referred to or included in the body of a document
Types of References

 Print sources




 Electronic sources
Handout #4 – The Complete Sample Paper

 Use this paper as a future reference
What Questions
  Can I Help
Answer for You?

APA Style, Writing And You

  • 1.
    APA Style, Writingand You A.P.A. DOESN’T MEAN “AGGRAVATING PAPER APPLICATIONS” Presenter: Nichole Hertel, M.Ed. Doctoral Resident and Teaching Fellow University of Houston
  • 2.
    Tonight’s Agenda  Jokes Some Questions about APA  What is APA Style?  Define “education”  Helpful Advice to Survive Writing  Brief Overview of the Dissertation Chapters  APA Formatting of Your Paper  Any Questions?
  • 3.
    Jokes – InHonor of Halloween  What is a Mummy's favorite type of music?  Wrap!!!!!  Why do demons and ghouls hang out together?  Because demons are a ghouls best friend!  What's a monster's favorite bean?  A human bean.  Why can't the boy ghost have babies?  Because he has a Hallo-weenie.
  • 4.
    About Me  3rdyear doctoral student – C&I  graduate in summer (hopefully!)  Bachelor of Journalism (UH )  Master in Education, Secondary Instruction (HBU)  Taught secondary and elementary grades  Currently teach Class Mgmt to pre-service teachers at Sugar Land and Main campuses  Mom of two
  • 5.
    So, Why AmI here?
  • 6.
  • 7.
    Before We Begin,Let’s Answer Some Questions about APA…  What is APA?  Why is it so important?  What does it do and do I benefit from it?  Why do we use it in the field of education?
  • 8.
    What is theAPA?  APA = The American Psychological Association  a professional organization representing psychologists in the U.S.  around 150,000 members  an annual budget of around $70M  Founded in July 1892 at Clark University by a group of 26 men  First president was G. Stanley Hall  There are currently 54 divisions and it is affiliated with 60 state, territorial, and Canadian provincial associations (Note: Occasionally confused with the America Psychiatric Association)
  • 9.
    APA Organization MissionStatement  To advance psychology:  as a science and profession and  as a means of promoting health, education, and human welfare by the encouragement of psychology in all its branches in the broadest and most liberal manner;  by the promotion of research in psychology and the improvement of research methods and conditions;  by the improvement of the qualifications and usefulness of psychologists through high standards of ethics, conduct, education, and achievement;  by the establishment and maintenance of the highest standards of professional ethics and conduct of the members of the Association;  by the increase and diffusion of psychological knowledge through meetings, professional contacts, reports, papers, discussions, and publications;  thereby to advance scientific interests and inquiry, and the application of research findings to the promotion of health, education, and the public welfare
  • 10.
    What is APAStyle?  A widely accepted style of documentation particularly in the social sciences area  Specifies multiple items within your paper:  the names and order of headings  paragraph formatting  organization of citations and references,  arrangement of tables, figures and appendices
  • 11.
    What is APAStyle? Cont.  And it uses Harvard referencing keyed to a subsequent list of References  Harvard referencing is also referred to as the author-date system of citations and parenthetical referencing  The APA Publication Manual provides basic guidelines for documenting both print and electronic resources.
  • 12.
    Why is APAStyle So Important?  For You…  Can make organizing your paper MUCH easier  For Your Reader…  Can make your paper easier to read for your intended audience
  • 13.
    What Does itDo & Do I Benefit From It? -YES!  If you wish to publish in a psychological or educational journal, then this is the style you will need to follow  It allows for protection in your writing through the use of references  Protects sources/authors you are quoting from being plagiarized  Protects you, the writer, from accusations of plagiarism
  • 14.
    Why Do WeUse It In the Education Field?  Education is found under the social sciences umbrella  The social sciences are comprise academic disciplines concerned with the study of the social life of human groups and individuals  A few examples: Anthropology, communications studies, criminology, economics, geography, history, political science, psychology, social studies and sociology
  • 15.
    What is “Education”Anyway?  Education encompasses teaching others (outward) and learning specific skills (inward)  It is the imparting of knowledge, positive judgment and well-developed wisdom from the inward self to and outward source
  • 16.
    What is “Education”Anyway? Cont.  “To educate” = to draw out  From the Latin “educare”  to facilitate the realization of an individual's potential and talents.  It is an application of pedagogy  a body of theoretical and applied research relating to teaching and learning  specifically draws on disciplines such as psychology, philosophy, computer science, linguistics, neuroscience, sociology and anthropology
  • 17.
    Why, again, isAPA Style Used?  Main reason: To give writers a standard format to follow when preparing their manuscripts for publication  Makes the editorial process go smoother  Provides editors with benchmarks against which to measure the quality of writing  Rules make converting writte work into published pages a more consistent process
  • 18.
    A Few HelpfulResources in Your Journey… Let’s take a look together
  • 19.
    Now It’s YourTurn  You will need these things for the next part:  Something to write with  This handout  The second handout titled “Sample APA Style Used in A Candidacy Paper”  The third titled “Levels of Heading”  The fourth titled APA Sample Paper  The dissertation in front of you (to share)  Your brains
  • 20.
    INHALE DEEPLY AND LET’S BEGIN
  • 21.
    General Formatting forEducation Papers  First, the words “papers,” “proposal,” “candidacy paper,” “dissertation,” and “article” are going to mean the same thing in terms of this discussion
  • 22.
    The Real Dissertations Thumb through the dissertation in front of you  What do you see?
  • 23.
    How Are thePapers Set Up?  Cover Page  Table of Contents  Abstract  Body of Paper  Chapters  Headings  Sections and Subsections  Tables and Figures  Citations  References  Appendices  Tables  Figures
  • 24.
    Body Chapters Briefly 5 main dissertation chapters:  The introductory part  The literature review  The methodology  The results  The discussion  All dissertation chapters have their specific characteristics
  • 25.
    Chapter 1: INTRODUCTION Presents the main problems which will be discussed in your dissertation  Important to demonstrate that your work is significant  Ending of this chapter is a statement of your research question  Think: How you came to this topic
  • 26.
    Chapter 2: LITERARYREVIEW  Main points which were presented in other researches on this topic  Qualitative studies "talk to" the literature  can be integrated throughout the paper, with advisor's approval  Quantitive studies present the literature  Relatively small compared to the rest of the chapters  4-5 concepts/key terms presented (develop completely)  Think: History of my topic
  • 27.
    Chapter 3: METHOLOGY Describes the methods and investigation  Try to prove your ideas by different references  Present your own ideas and viewpoints  include strong rationales  Will lead-in to your conclusion in the next chapter  AKA persuasive argument paper  Think: Turn your reader into an agreer
  • 28.
    Chapter 4: RESULTS Sum up all of your research  Show that all the necessary questions have been answered  Be crystal clear and laconic  Series of chapters/subchapters divided by logical and natural layout of the inquiry  Think: Scientific Method Syntax (not actual scientific method used)
  • 29.
    Chapter 5: DISCUSSION Compare your results with the results made by others  Demonstrate your knowledge and skills in theory and practice  End with the new knowledge you are bringing to the field (leads to Chapter 6)  Think: The reason I should get an "A" on this assignment is because…
  • 30.
    Chapter 6: REFLECTION Optional Chapter  but push in Education now is on the self-reflective practitioner  I call it the “I.E.S.” Chapter  Think: What impact did my learning have directly on me?
  • 31.
    Last Words onDissertation Chapters  Very important to create a logical connection  often happens slowly  The more interesting your info is presented, the more captivated your reader becomes in your paper  Good for us because advisor/editors will read to enjoy and learn rather than to critique 
  • 32.
    APA Within YourPaper  Covers mainly Chapters 2-5  Specific Parts Are:  Sections and Subsections  Headings  Tables and Figures  Citations  References
  • 33.
    Sections and Subsections Typically include the following 7 sections  Title Page  Abstract  Body  References  Tables (new page for each table)  Figure captions  Figures (new page for each figure)  Also, avoid having one sub-section heading in a paper.  Let’s look at Handout #2
  • 34.
    Headings  Aid inestablishing the hierarchy of the sections of a paper to help orient the reader  Topics within a paper that have equal importance will have the same level of headings throughout the paper  Can also function as an outline to reveal the papers organization
  • 35.
    Levels of Headings Consists of five possible formatting arrangements, each according to the levels of subordination. The headings are numbered Level 1, Level 2, and so forth to Level 5  Level 1: Centered, Boldface, Uppercase and Lowercase Headings  Level 2: Left-aligned, Boldface, Uppercase and Lowercase Heading  Level 3: Indented, boldface, lowercase heading with period.  Level 4: Indented, boldface, italicized, lowercase heading with period.  Level 5: Indented, italicized, lowercase heading with period  Let’s Look at Handout 3
  • 36.
    Tables and Figures “table” = data that is entered in columns and rows  “figure” = all other kinds of illustration or representation of data  Integrated throughout the paper where needed AND attached at the end of the document  Data should not be just left as a narrative  Put into SOME kind of graphic or chart form -- either as a table or as a figure (such as a bar graph or a pie chart)
  • 37.
    Tables and FiguresCont.  In the paper body, center table/figure and label all information  Describe table (pretend the table is not there and your are telling the reader about it)  At the end of the document after Appendices, one table/ figure per page  What you should use depends on what facts you are trying to display  Think: What is the most informative way to display the information?
  • 38.
    Hints About Tablesand Figures  Figures  should not have tick marks for the measures  should have titles for the x and y axis  should not have outline around the graph  should not have minor lines on the chart  the legend should either not exist if the graph is simple or should be inside the chart  need to be on a figure captions page, with an explanation of the data represented  do not have page numbers, and should have penciled in, on the back the top and the figure caption that corresponds to it.  Tables  do have page numbers  do not have vertical lines
  • 39.
    Citations  Reference citationsin text are done using parenthetical referencing  Involves enclosing the author's surname and the date of publication within parentheses, separated by a comma, generally placed immediately after the reference or at the end of the sentence in which the reference is made.  Also common for the authors to be the subject or object of a sentence.  In the case of a quotation, the page number is also included in the citation.
  • 40.
    Citation Examples  Example1 –  Pauling (2005) writes that “after a successful experiment, I discovered a possible genetic cause of alcoholism” (p. 123).  Example 2 –  Pauling (2005) discovered a possible genetic cause of alcoholism.  Example 3 -  A recent study found a possible genetic cause of alcoholism (Pauling, 2005).
  • 41.
    Direct vs. IndirectQuotes  Direct Quotation = exactly what the author wrote  Indirect Quotation = a paraphrasing of what the author wrote  The same rules apply, the format being (Author, Year, Page Number).
  • 42.
    Direct vs. IndirectQuote Examples  Example #1 –  When asked why his behavior had changed so dramatically, Max simply said he believed it was because of the reinforcement (Pauling, 2004, p. 69).  Example #2 –  When asked why his behavior had changed so dramatically, Max simply said, "I think it's the reinforcement" (Pauling, 2004, p. 69).
  • 43.
    Statistical Expressions inAPA  There are certain ways to do this as well  Don’t be concerned about it yet  If needed, ask Dr. Ruban for assistance  Take EDRS 8382
  • 44.
    References  Full bibliographicinformation  Found at the end of the paper  Can only include articles that are cited within the body of an paper  This is the distinction between a document having a Reference section and a bibliography, which may incorporate sources which may have been read by the authors as background, but not referred to or included in the body of a document
  • 45.
    Types of References Print sources  Electronic sources
  • 46.
    Handout #4 –The Complete Sample Paper  Use this paper as a future reference
  • 47.
    What Questions Can I Help Answer for You?