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Analysis of year 13

By Michelle Asafu-Adjaye
1st Documentary
                                WWW (what went well)
                   Title: Slanguage
                   Details: Its about the use and misuse of the
                   English language. It focuses on the use of
                   slang and the influence of media on the
                   English language.


                                                                  They used this clip
                                                                  from BBC three
                                                                  which shows that
                                                                  the documentary is
                                                                  on this channel and
                                                                  it also makes it
                                                                  more realistic. Also
                                                                  there’s a good use
                                                                  of voiceover when
Good introduction of what the                                     this is shown.
documentary will be about
They use other forms of presenting
information instead of always talking
like typing it on a computer screen for              They use graphics and pictures usefully and it’s in sync
the audience to read.                                with the voiceover.




 They get feedback from members of the public to
 find out their views and it makes the documentary
 more realistic.
EBI (even better if)
•Whilst filming the computer screen the camera wasn't really steady.
•At some points the music was louder than the person talking.
•When they were interviewing the members of the public, sometimes the
background noise interfered with their responses.
2nd Documentary
                   Name: Taboo ink
                   Details: It explores the popularity of tattoos in the
                   contemporary UK and peoples perception of them.

                   WWW (what went well)




They used a clip from an                           They got the view points of other people on their
advert on channel four which                       perceptions of tattoos and these where taken in various
made it more realistic and                         locations.
added a voiceover.
Good use of locations and
      Camden is a very good                         The title written in
      location for the topic of                     ink on a body part is
      this documentary.                             very effective as it
                                                    has connotations to
                                                    tattoos.

             EBI (even better if)
•The narrators voice was not very clear and
couldn’t be heard clearly.
•It would have been better if they also talked
about the history of tattoos and not just peoples
opinions on them.
•The ending would have been better if they
mentioned what they would be showing on the
next episode.
3rd Documentary
                Title: Gender based toys
                Description: Its about how boys and girls are socialised
                in to playing with toys that are specific to their gender.

                WWW (what went well)




                                                         They get interviews from
                                                         professionals which makes the
A good variety of images of children playing in          documentary seem more factual.
different locations.
Good use of objects to
                                 present facts and figures.




Very good image
of the brain and its
movement.




                       They show previews of what they’ll be
                       showing next episode.
EBI (even better if)

•There wasn’t really a wide variety of locations it was a bit limited.
•They should have used a wider range of people to interview as this was
very limited as well.
•It would have been better if talked about other factors in gender
socialisation because they focused on colours to much and became too
repetitive.
Which documentary was most
            effective and why?
I think the documentary on name
brands was the most effective
because it was very relevant to the
contemporary UK today as we are
constantly faced with them
everywhere we go. The topic of name
brands is a topic that you can find lots
of information on and this
documentary is also able to explore
how technology has influenced the
popularity of name brands. They
particularly focus on the apple brand
                                         A wide range of shots of different brands.
which has become increasingly
popular.                                  •They went to a busy place where they could
                                          capture most of the brands they needed.
                                          •When they talk about apple they also talk about
                                          the history of apple advertising and how it has
                                          evolved and become popular.

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Analysis of year 13

  • 1. Analysis of year 13 By Michelle Asafu-Adjaye
  • 2. 1st Documentary WWW (what went well) Title: Slanguage Details: Its about the use and misuse of the English language. It focuses on the use of slang and the influence of media on the English language. They used this clip from BBC three which shows that the documentary is on this channel and it also makes it more realistic. Also there’s a good use of voiceover when Good introduction of what the this is shown. documentary will be about
  • 3. They use other forms of presenting information instead of always talking like typing it on a computer screen for They use graphics and pictures usefully and it’s in sync the audience to read. with the voiceover. They get feedback from members of the public to find out their views and it makes the documentary more realistic.
  • 4. EBI (even better if) •Whilst filming the computer screen the camera wasn't really steady. •At some points the music was louder than the person talking. •When they were interviewing the members of the public, sometimes the background noise interfered with their responses.
  • 5. 2nd Documentary Name: Taboo ink Details: It explores the popularity of tattoos in the contemporary UK and peoples perception of them. WWW (what went well) They used a clip from an They got the view points of other people on their advert on channel four which perceptions of tattoos and these where taken in various made it more realistic and locations. added a voiceover.
  • 6. Good use of locations and Camden is a very good The title written in location for the topic of ink on a body part is this documentary. very effective as it has connotations to tattoos. EBI (even better if) •The narrators voice was not very clear and couldn’t be heard clearly. •It would have been better if they also talked about the history of tattoos and not just peoples opinions on them. •The ending would have been better if they mentioned what they would be showing on the next episode.
  • 7. 3rd Documentary Title: Gender based toys Description: Its about how boys and girls are socialised in to playing with toys that are specific to their gender. WWW (what went well) They get interviews from professionals which makes the A good variety of images of children playing in documentary seem more factual. different locations.
  • 8. Good use of objects to present facts and figures. Very good image of the brain and its movement. They show previews of what they’ll be showing next episode.
  • 9. EBI (even better if) •There wasn’t really a wide variety of locations it was a bit limited. •They should have used a wider range of people to interview as this was very limited as well. •It would have been better if talked about other factors in gender socialisation because they focused on colours to much and became too repetitive.
  • 10. Which documentary was most effective and why? I think the documentary on name brands was the most effective because it was very relevant to the contemporary UK today as we are constantly faced with them everywhere we go. The topic of name brands is a topic that you can find lots of information on and this documentary is also able to explore how technology has influenced the popularity of name brands. They particularly focus on the apple brand A wide range of shots of different brands. which has become increasingly popular. •They went to a busy place where they could capture most of the brands they needed. •When they talk about apple they also talk about the history of apple advertising and how it has evolved and become popular.