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1. Jay Franks
Analysis of pitches
Jacob’sPitch
Kieran’sPitch
Tafi’sPitch
Connor’sPitch
Sophie’sPitch

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Megan’sPitch
Adam’sPitch
Paige’sPitch
Alfie’sPitch
Hannah Duncan’sPitch

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Hannah Goodman’sPitch
Marakesh’sPitch
Max’s Pitch
Sahil’sPitch
Libby’sPitch

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These screenshotsshowme analysingthe restof myclassmate’spitchesbypostingacommenton
theirblog.Ihave giventhemgoodfeedbackasI have explainedindetailwhatIthinkwasgood about
theirpitchfor theirmagazine,aswell asmentioningnegativecriticismontheirideasotheycan
make amendmentstotheirideawhenitcomestodesigningit.
Jasmine’sPitch
Emily’sPitch
Jess’sPitch