Aldhafeeri 1 University Men and Women You need to pick one overall subject and talk about it in-depth. Right now you are switching from topic to topic without one overall theme that organizes this paper. I would limit your discussion to just looking at drug use and the stress of college students, or limit your paper to discussing just the ides of how men and women function inside and outside of the classroom and if college favors one gender over another. Currently there are just too many topics being discussed. Your introduction needs to address what you are going to talk about in your paper and then introduce your reader to that topic. You then need to discuss that topic in the body paragraphs of your paper. Your conclusion should include your opinion and summarize all the main points. Abstract According to most researches, there have been reported cases of increase in homosexuality among university men and women. The rise in homosexuality has also been linked to drug and substance abuse. Most of the substances abused were alcohol, tobacco and marijuana. Homosexuality is not a common sexual practice and those who practice it are mostly filled with a feeling of incompleteness or being less normal than others. This in turn affects them psychologically making them feel like rejects of society and at most times resolve to indulge in drug and substance abuse to try console themselves and assist them feel less depressed. In most university students, we can link drug use to homosexuality or psychological distress or both in some cases. In most if not all universities, since time immemorial men have dominated fields such as engineering, law and medicine. These have been thought to be courses for the masculine gender not the feminine. Though as the years have passed by, there has been a recorded increase in the number of women in law faculties mostly. Women have taken charge and are now entering what was usually called the masculine field and are surprisingly doing better than their male counterparts. It has also been reported that there is constant gender discrimination against females who pursue these male dominated courses and programs. In fact, according to Benokraitis, 1998, gender discrimination increases as one goes higher up the educational hierarchy. Women are said to be tender and timid and according to Farley, 1996, they were denied admission to the Illinois bar after being declared unfit for the rude world of law practice. Mainly this is because women have not been accorded the same status and power as men have been given. Such treatment of females may affect them psychologically and make them feel less. Psychological distress mostly leads one to indulging in drug and substance abuse though among peers, it usually is due to peer pressure. Drugs are in many forms; orally consumed, others absorbed through the nasal cavity, some injected into the body using syringes and some applied on the skin and absorbed (Hammes & Haller, 2006). Male.