Kristina D’Arcangelo                                                                D’Arcangelo 1

Professor David DiSarro

English 101

13 February 2013

                              A Walk to Remember

       It was a brisk, windy day in late April. I woke up to my mother yelling at me, “Tina, get

up and make yourself useful for a change!” As usual, I groaned, rolled over, and decided that I

was not going to get up. After a few more unsuccessful attempts to get me out of bed by yelling

up the stairs, my mom finally ran up the stairs like a bat out of hell and opened my bedroom

door. “The whole family is going to walk around the neighborhood and try to raise money, and I

want you to be a part of it this year!” my mother scolded. She was talking about the Walk for

Hunger.


       For the previous five years, my mother, father, and older sister, Jessica, had participated

in the 20 mile walk through Boston known as the Walk for Hunger. It is a fundraiser in which

people sponsor “walkers” to walk anywhere from 1 to 20 miles throughout Boston.                 The

proceeds go to help starving families. This year, my younger sister, Sara, was finally old enough

to participate, and couldn’t wait. She was elated, dancing and singing around the house like a

showgirl. Her eagerness and willingness amazed me. How could an eight year old be so excited

to partake in a long, dreary walk, let alone a fundraiser? This got me thinking, “If Sara’s doing it

this year, I will never hear the end of it from Mom and Dad. Maybe I’ll just walk a few miles.”

I sluggishly shared my thoughts with my mother complaining, “Maybe I can walk five miles or

so, but I’m notdoing the whole thing.” My mother was grinning from ear to ear, and that proud

look in her sparkling light blue eyes, told me I couldn’t amend my decision or back down.
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       Unfortunately, the guilt and shame of my younger sister participating in the walk didn’t

hit me until a week before the actual Walk for Hunger. My parents and sisters had already been

throughout the entire neighborhood, as well as their jobs, asking people to sponsor them and

donate money, so I didn’t know where to start. The sponsors will either donate a sum of money

of their choice or donate a certain amount of money for every mile you complete. I figured my

only option was to still walk around the neighborhood and see what happened. I can remember

starting at my neighbor’s house next door, when a ginormous gust of chilling wind blew my

pamphlet out of my hands. I began chasing after my papers thinking, “I knew this was a horrible

idea.” To my surprise, every single house I knocked on donated money. I could not believe that

people were still contributing even after they had already donated to my four other family

members. I also asked some of my teachers, all of which donated as well. Every single one of

my teachers was so proud of me and thought I was doing a very honorable thing. My disbelief

started changing into satisfaction.


       Every year the Walk for Hunger is executed on a Sunday. Walkers can begin as early as

six o’clock AM. To my dismay, my mother would not let me out of the house the Saturday night

before. Again, I was regretting my choice to participate and was furious. When the big day

finally arrived, my mother woke me up at 5:00 AM, telling me that it was going to be very cold

and rainy. I put on many layers of clothing shivering, just thinking about the treacherous road

ahead of me.


       The 15 minute ride into Boston felt endless, I even looked out the window a few times,

making sure we weren’t lost. When we finally arrived at the starting point, my attitude rapidly
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changed.   Everyone was so cheerful and pleasant, “Thanks for coming this year! Anyone

hungry? We have yogurts and granola bars!” Another woman ran up to me and my two sisters,

handing us pins with the project bread logo. “Aren’t you guys something! You know everyone

appreciates you guys coming out. Your parents must be lovely!” The gratitude from all of the

Walk for Hunger directors was warming and overwhelming, especially when she pointed my

sisters and me out in the crowd.


       We immediately started the walk. I can remember walking along the Charles River in a

torrential downpour with blustering winds forcing the rain to go sideways. I had a numbing chill

throughout my entire body. I kept forcing myself to think, “You’re doing the right thing. People

die every day from hunger, and the rain is not going to kill you.” I stuck it out, and ended up

walking the entire twenty miles with the rest of my family. To this day, I have never walked that

long aside from the Walk for Hunger. My family alone ended up raising over $2,000, which was

very rewarding.


       When I woke up the next day, I was like a concrete statue, unable to bend, let alone

move. My entire body was in excruciating pain. That extremely lengthy walk has shaped me. I

realized that I had taken my comfortable life for granted. Everyday for the next week and a half,

my aching, throbbing body was a constant reminder of how fortunate I am to have a roof over

my head and food on the table. I am lucky to have such great parents to support me and push me

to become a better person. If it wasn’t for them, I would have never done the Walk for Hunger

or probably any other fundraiser. I also recognized the importance of community service. As a

family we now partake in many other charitable events. Every year we still participate in the
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Walk for Hunger, as well as stock shelves at the local food pantry, organize the Council of Social

Concern auction, and take part in Comcast cares day, which is a day people volunteer their time

to clean parks and clean and repaint boys and girls clubs. Without community service, the death

rate would tremendously rise. Whenever I need a little reminder I just think of my bone chilling,

painfully sore body, and think to myself, “I could be that uncomfortable everyday, but

fortunately I am not.” It takes courage and devotion for someone to give up their own time and

money for a needy person; but if you put yourself in someone less fortunate’s shoes your mind

would change too. At first, I thought 20 miles was unbearable, but after accomplishing it I

realized that starvation was much more intolerable than walking.

A walk to remember final draft

  • 1.
    Kristina D’Arcangelo D’Arcangelo 1 Professor David DiSarro English 101 13 February 2013 A Walk to Remember It was a brisk, windy day in late April. I woke up to my mother yelling at me, “Tina, get up and make yourself useful for a change!” As usual, I groaned, rolled over, and decided that I was not going to get up. After a few more unsuccessful attempts to get me out of bed by yelling up the stairs, my mom finally ran up the stairs like a bat out of hell and opened my bedroom door. “The whole family is going to walk around the neighborhood and try to raise money, and I want you to be a part of it this year!” my mother scolded. She was talking about the Walk for Hunger. For the previous five years, my mother, father, and older sister, Jessica, had participated in the 20 mile walk through Boston known as the Walk for Hunger. It is a fundraiser in which people sponsor “walkers” to walk anywhere from 1 to 20 miles throughout Boston. The proceeds go to help starving families. This year, my younger sister, Sara, was finally old enough to participate, and couldn’t wait. She was elated, dancing and singing around the house like a showgirl. Her eagerness and willingness amazed me. How could an eight year old be so excited to partake in a long, dreary walk, let alone a fundraiser? This got me thinking, “If Sara’s doing it this year, I will never hear the end of it from Mom and Dad. Maybe I’ll just walk a few miles.” I sluggishly shared my thoughts with my mother complaining, “Maybe I can walk five miles or so, but I’m notdoing the whole thing.” My mother was grinning from ear to ear, and that proud look in her sparkling light blue eyes, told me I couldn’t amend my decision or back down.
  • 2.
    D’Arcangelo 2 Unfortunately, the guilt and shame of my younger sister participating in the walk didn’t hit me until a week before the actual Walk for Hunger. My parents and sisters had already been throughout the entire neighborhood, as well as their jobs, asking people to sponsor them and donate money, so I didn’t know where to start. The sponsors will either donate a sum of money of their choice or donate a certain amount of money for every mile you complete. I figured my only option was to still walk around the neighborhood and see what happened. I can remember starting at my neighbor’s house next door, when a ginormous gust of chilling wind blew my pamphlet out of my hands. I began chasing after my papers thinking, “I knew this was a horrible idea.” To my surprise, every single house I knocked on donated money. I could not believe that people were still contributing even after they had already donated to my four other family members. I also asked some of my teachers, all of which donated as well. Every single one of my teachers was so proud of me and thought I was doing a very honorable thing. My disbelief started changing into satisfaction. Every year the Walk for Hunger is executed on a Sunday. Walkers can begin as early as six o’clock AM. To my dismay, my mother would not let me out of the house the Saturday night before. Again, I was regretting my choice to participate and was furious. When the big day finally arrived, my mother woke me up at 5:00 AM, telling me that it was going to be very cold and rainy. I put on many layers of clothing shivering, just thinking about the treacherous road ahead of me. The 15 minute ride into Boston felt endless, I even looked out the window a few times, making sure we weren’t lost. When we finally arrived at the starting point, my attitude rapidly
  • 3.
    D’Arcangelo 3 changed. Everyone was so cheerful and pleasant, “Thanks for coming this year! Anyone hungry? We have yogurts and granola bars!” Another woman ran up to me and my two sisters, handing us pins with the project bread logo. “Aren’t you guys something! You know everyone appreciates you guys coming out. Your parents must be lovely!” The gratitude from all of the Walk for Hunger directors was warming and overwhelming, especially when she pointed my sisters and me out in the crowd. We immediately started the walk. I can remember walking along the Charles River in a torrential downpour with blustering winds forcing the rain to go sideways. I had a numbing chill throughout my entire body. I kept forcing myself to think, “You’re doing the right thing. People die every day from hunger, and the rain is not going to kill you.” I stuck it out, and ended up walking the entire twenty miles with the rest of my family. To this day, I have never walked that long aside from the Walk for Hunger. My family alone ended up raising over $2,000, which was very rewarding. When I woke up the next day, I was like a concrete statue, unable to bend, let alone move. My entire body was in excruciating pain. That extremely lengthy walk has shaped me. I realized that I had taken my comfortable life for granted. Everyday for the next week and a half, my aching, throbbing body was a constant reminder of how fortunate I am to have a roof over my head and food on the table. I am lucky to have such great parents to support me and push me to become a better person. If it wasn’t for them, I would have never done the Walk for Hunger or probably any other fundraiser. I also recognized the importance of community service. As a family we now partake in many other charitable events. Every year we still participate in the
  • 4.
    D’Arcangelo 4 Walk forHunger, as well as stock shelves at the local food pantry, organize the Council of Social Concern auction, and take part in Comcast cares day, which is a day people volunteer their time to clean parks and clean and repaint boys and girls clubs. Without community service, the death rate would tremendously rise. Whenever I need a little reminder I just think of my bone chilling, painfully sore body, and think to myself, “I could be that uncomfortable everyday, but fortunately I am not.” It takes courage and devotion for someone to give up their own time and money for a needy person; but if you put yourself in someone less fortunate’s shoes your mind would change too. At first, I thought 20 miles was unbearable, but after accomplishing it I realized that starvation was much more intolerable than walking.