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Teacher feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Green screen      •More variety
                   of shot types
•Confident at
 performing        •Hands out of
                   shot
•Well synced
                   •More
                   narrative
Student feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Fast editing      •Lighting

•Cuts to the       •All mid shots
beat
                   •Too much
                   green screen

                   •More
                   narrative
Student feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Green screen      •Lighting

•Framing           •Some green
                   screen shots
•Good editing
                   •One scene is
•Effective         out of sync
performance
shots              •More
                   narrative
Student feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Cheesy            •Lighting

•Edited well       •More
                   narrative
•Fits genre

•Green screen
Student feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Seemed like a     •Storyline -
girl band          narrative

•Fits genre        •Green screen

•Costume           •Shadows
Student feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Fits genre        •Less green
                   screen
•Performance
shots good         •More
                   narrative
Student feedback

WWW:                EBI:

•Close up of lips   •More
                    narrative
•Green screen
Student feedback

WWW:               EBI:

•Synced well       •All mid shots

•Up tempo          •More
                   narrative
•Cuts with beat

•Green screen
What we can take from this:
- We are going to re-film some shots without the green screen
as everyone felt that there were too many green screen shots,
this will be done either in front of the black or white screen and
using close ups and long shots to add variety.

- We are also not going to use the shots on the split screen
where our hand are cut off as it does not look right.

- We are also going to re-film some narrative scenes so we have
more to add in so it makes sense.

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Feedback pictures powerpoint

  • 1. Teacher feedback WWW: EBI: •Green screen •More variety of shot types •Confident at performing •Hands out of shot •Well synced •More narrative
  • 2. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Fast editing •Lighting •Cuts to the •All mid shots beat •Too much green screen •More narrative
  • 3. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Green screen •Lighting •Framing •Some green screen shots •Good editing •One scene is •Effective out of sync performance shots •More narrative
  • 4. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Cheesy •Lighting •Edited well •More narrative •Fits genre •Green screen
  • 5. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Seemed like a •Storyline - girl band narrative •Fits genre •Green screen •Costume •Shadows
  • 6. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Fits genre •Less green screen •Performance shots good •More narrative
  • 7. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Close up of lips •More narrative •Green screen
  • 8. Student feedback WWW: EBI: •Synced well •All mid shots •Up tempo •More narrative •Cuts with beat •Green screen
  • 9. What we can take from this: - We are going to re-film some shots without the green screen as everyone felt that there were too many green screen shots, this will be done either in front of the black or white screen and using close ups and long shots to add variety. - We are also not going to use the shots on the split screen where our hand are cut off as it does not look right. - We are also going to re-film some narrative scenes so we have more to add in so it makes sense.